Comments by tinkdarkchyld
- "~smies impishly~ well, i did enjoy the way it was laid out, splashed out if not to trite to say....but gotta say, had to comment when i saw snowdrops snarl...not enough snarling in the world ~tips my head and poofs~
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Posted by tinkdarkchyld on "radial experience" by whisperer
- "~eyes finish the work as a whole then read parts seperatly~ the work is painful to read, but the ache begs to be held close and read until its almost unbareable. sublime."
Posted by tinkdarkchyld on "forgotten" by whisperer
- "the words build a view into two worlds, both are bittersweet and trajic. but still im compelled to read it over and over, maybe because of the sweet ache..."
Posted by tinkdarkchyld on "Muse of the actress" by whisperer
- "the words cut and etch ideas, but the marks left by them dont burn, they pulse and itch for inner clarity. as always, thought provocing and inticing writting."
Posted by tinkdarkchyld on "from the shadow within" by whisperer
- "~blushes deeply~ I just write how I feel, and dont really care too much if it fits the standard for poetry. I was feeling very depressed and started writing, mid way I got angry at myself for downward spirialing and that is how the ending was spawned. I am glad that in my writings own odd way can help anyone though. be well"
Posted by tinkdarkchyld on "Alone But Not Lost" by tinkdarkchyld
- "~watches the long ago echo of snowdrop walk away and frowns softly~ it was heart felt, and i truely loved the flow of it. very fluid the image of a broken dream."
Posted by tinkdarkchyld on "you recoiled from me" by whisperer
- "the ache pulsates thru the words, you weaver of emotions. it burns like fire but soothes at the same time. some who havent felt it wont see it for what it is."
Posted by tinkdarkchyld on "the press" by whisperer
- "the faster the heart accelerates, the quicker the virus spreads. im already lost having read this, carve my stone now im not long for this world."
Posted by tinkdarkchyld on "virus" by whisperer
