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A toast!
By veingo
I could use
A caring embrace.
A concerned touch.
A comforting
smile.
I could use some words of wisdom
Not wives tales.
Not drivel.
Not cliches.
I mean, are you kidding me?
A stage?
A dream??
A box of chocolates???
It's more like a shot of whiskey down the wrong pipe.
Cheers!
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© 2008 veingo
Published on Tuesday, October 28, 2008.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
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On Friday, September 6, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
Nice! It definitely is like that sometimes... Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
A toast indeed! I will drink to this great write!
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A former member wrote:
good thing i like whiskey.
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A former member wrote:
Congrats on PoTD, man.... next time through... we'll toast a few more ;) ... CHEERS! to the days of ole.
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A former member wrote:
**hugs** and... CHEERS! :)
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On Saturday, June 12, 2010, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
*hugs* perfect
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A former member wrote:
haha CHEERS!
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A former member wrote:
...whiskey's quicker... suicide is slow with liqueur... CHEERS!
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A former member wrote:
this burns just like good poetry (and good whiskey) should.
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, Sin
(1168) wrote:
i'll drink to that..sometimes you just gotta say fuck it ~k
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On Thursday, April 9, 2009, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Yup, we usually remember and learn(hopefully) from the harsh things...but that is sometimes just what we need for a wake up call...*slaps you and shakes your shoulders for good measure ...the first 3 are good in their place too...and with the chocolate :)
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On Thursday, March 5, 2009, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
fast, like a drink sliding towards you...... the existential nip of bitter and well worn intelligence.....well done......urban
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A former member wrote:
give me the hole bottle
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On Saturday, February 7, 2009, Ashteroth
(192) wrote:
:-) Yeah, I hear you. I liked this piece.
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A former member wrote:
i agree.
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On Friday, November 7, 2008, Lylani
(116) wrote:
Brilliant - we're so often often thrown these old cliches to pacify our torment when all we need is something of substance
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A former member wrote:
I like the way the question marks increase in number... and the slanted arrangement of words, but I'm easily amused and pacified. I'm thinkin' whiskey tastes better down the right pipe... but then, maybe that's the point, huh? CHEERS! Definitely time to toast in the chatter.
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On Wednesday, October 29, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
oh so true... i think i was expecting something softer with the opening and with the twist it brought a bit of a cynical smile my way only because this is just sooo right, hehe *hugs*
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A former member wrote:
*huggles* le yipe! ive done that, >_< if not the worst feeling in my life, pretty damned close. great write mr. magician
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