Log In
The Daily Special
By freudian-slip
Never really sure of his own personal preference
but never the less
left
completely famished
What kind
of state of mind
would put you in an endless hunger?
I'm thinking
it's ego based
relying consistently
on the reactions of others
and having little to do with what fills the space inside
besides
you can never feel satisfied
with a full belly
and an empty heart
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Thursday, July 10, 2008.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Daily Special"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Dilated View
(582)
wrote:
Touche. Last three lines spoke volumes and left me wondering.
-
On Wednesday, August 20, 2008, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
I love the cleverly delivered contrast in the end. Also, something most can relate to.
-
A former member wrote:
I hear what skets is saying , yet for me it's the conrolled hammer that drives it home for me...very well spoken
-
On Thursday, July 10, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(287) wrote:
Thought provoking and wonderfully well written. Bravo!
-
On Thursday, July 10, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
dunno if I like the sledgehammer that rides behind these words... so close to home, for many, I would assume. It takes a steady hand to challenge the reader, each reader, directly, but in this, you have done just that.
-
On Thursday, July 10, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
thats true :D i like this piece, truthful and well written, pierces hearts -symph-
freudian-slip's Latest Works Feed
Join