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ok then...................
By whisperer
seconds to death claims me
what should i say
point on the compass yet you die
if you run away
tempest for you foolhardy yet the dance is life's tempo
destined for jailtime requiem for jackasses
time the bullet for the temple of the fastest
im no fool i do
what you want to
inject the adrenaline its what we all came for
despite the pay i
find happiness in the blood of the fool
dynamite and .357
grenade or c4 is where i find my heaven
demons are humans too
fuck your justice i
just want to kill you
for me
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© 2008 whisperer
Published on Tuesday, March 4, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "ok then..................."
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On Saturday, March 15, 2008, RubyXero
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wrote:
I liked the whole piece. especially the last two stanzas...
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw
(44) wrote:
I adored the second stanza and the curtness of the almost unexpected two word ending was pretty fantastic. Dig it.
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
......just the last two words at the ending,,made it perfect..it was perfect to begin with, its like a quiet storm, beautiful,..i love your work
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