(s)laughter

By whisperer

where it lasts beneath the skin
irreverent thoughts benign within
lust is lost without its sin just misdirected want till you put the focus in
i see the blame in your savage eye
the accusation that points to i
resurrect your angel's sigh
your angels seethe and my devils cry

point the question that you know so well
insurrection rings my bell
choke so hard you're doing so well
it breaks my heart escaping from within my hell

point the finger
send the singer
desecration suits your heart

cold is bleeding ears are ringing in the point beyond making enemies love
despot coming
keep me running im at my best when you take the very last step
the pain is there and so am i, when it churns i can see in your rancid eye
laugh now when the pain subsides until devils laugh and the angels cry

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© 2008 whisperer
Published on Saturday, February 16, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • RubyXero On Saturday, February 23, 2008, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    mmm...yummy. i liked this one.

  • Alanarchy On Saturday, February 16, 2008, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    One of the best pieces that have been shared with me in a little while. Write on. Dig the rhythm. Should be a song.

  • Rebel tiGer King On Saturday, February 16, 2008, Rebel tiGer King (239)By person wrote:

    evilish, i enjoyed this read, fourth stanza was my fave, good write -symph-

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