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By liquid_emotion
There is no
Saving grace
From yourself
And a mirror
That screams
Obscenities
At eyes
So cold and pale
Death is not
A word
Compared to
The sicknesses
That eats at you
From the inside
Out
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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Saturday, April 26, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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On Friday, January 4, 2008, elisa
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looking in to see out.... self cannibalized. nicely done.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
intense, like boiling black oil seeping from you duodendum into your stomach, burning, aching, death sounds like a holiday.
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A former member wrote:
Awesome! intense, deep and easily relatable. Good write!
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On Sunday, April 27, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
Beautiful, short and sweet...straight to the point, even though the point can not be found only shadows....wonderful write! ~gothic~
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A former member wrote:
Oh, nice. Deep, dark, and an imagination sparker. I enjoyed it. :)
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, Stranger
(263) wrote:
With a razor blades efficiency, you cut to the bone with this one.
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A former member wrote:
Great job!!*Chelsie*
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
the ending caught me right through...this is great!
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