August And Romance

By Guillotine

Here;
This rose is for you.
I figure it's about time you had it
I've been holding it since June.

...This heart, too
It races, it races
It's yours.

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Published on Sunday, August 19, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "August And Romance"

On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

I like how the Two stanza are in the same form, though distant on the page, and both conveying a similar notion. Thank you for sharing, as I could relate. :)
On Saturday, October 13, 2012, mysterylove (97) wrote:

i melted then stopped breathing. very short yet bittersweet'ly' perfect.
On Monday, December 5, 2011, Ladyhawke (392) wrote:

Oh my god, this is so beautiful!! The shortness, it's so incredibly sweet. How did I miss this before? I'm sorry I did. Beautiful write.
On Wednesday, December 22, 2010, Artanis (56) wrote:

the simpest things speak the truth of feeling.well done.
A former member wrote: so sweet, oh geez, now im bleary eyed. ^_^
On Monday, January 21, 2008, Revisable Retina (81) wrote:

Love this
On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

*sigh* You are my secret lover beyond secrets in my mind, just that sneaky dream that creeps in when no ones looking, your poetry leaves me love-drunk and makes me fall to pieces.. ;heart:
On Sunday, August 19, 2007, Narcissa (391) wrote:

awww/sigh/awwww....
A former member wrote: a space and a heart just big enough to drown in. . ..beautiful little creation~
On Sunday, August 19, 2007, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Sweet :) -Carl
On Sunday, August 19, 2007, Err0r (358) wrote:

I love this so much mister. :D This is by far one of my favorite writes by you. So sweet, so much said, so romantic. I love it.
On Sunday, August 19, 2007, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

it's lovely, no matter how embellished or not.. the sentiment the feeling behind it makes it so...
On Sunday, August 19, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

First stanza was great. Second one less great, but still good