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you say fall, i say how hard
By swing_the_hammer
she goes by the name you gave her
i go buy a ticket home
go ahead hurt me. you can have her
i will walk these roads alone
it's a lie- you cannot save her
you can't even set down your phone
it's too much old news. i would rather
learn now than to not have known
i really hope you never forgave her
and all these lies get etched in stone
maybe someday you'll be braver
after you're cut down to the bone
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© 2007 swing_the_hammer
Published on Friday, August 10, 2007.
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Comments on "you say fall, i say how hard"
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On Thursday, August 16, 2007, Bella Butchery
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wrote:
ghaaaa!!!!! sigur ros... i know i put pieces to music, but for me that is the highest form of flattery.... i can hear this to a haunting melody of a violinist swaying over a guitar... luminous.
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On Saturday, August 11, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
the rhyme scheme rocked and the point fell hard, and smooth. perfect poetry.
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A former member wrote:
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On Friday, August 10, 2007, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
short and sweet. sinister, and all of that. good job.
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On Friday, August 10, 2007, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
v good
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