A Monet Sky

By liquid_emotion

Streaks of white light and pink
Against the blue of your eyes
And I don’t remember your voice
Or recall whether or not I love you
I pulled away from your world
And then forgot to tell you why
Left in the emptiness I am filling
Dumping out and filling again
Nothing feels right in my thoughts
And still I cannot bring myself
To let you deep inside a secret
That won’t whisper through
Plastic letters and dim lit screens
So I slip away quietly unnoticed
And pretend you left me here

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Published on Wednesday, April 23, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "A Monet Sky"

On Friday, April 25, 2003, shadowsinthelight (146) wrote:

All the above, S.
On Thursday, April 24, 2003, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

brilliantly done.
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, DoctorAsh (371) wrote:

a nerve ending poked .. nicely done
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

well, that doesn't sound soothing:)
A former member wrote: WOW! i love this too good write liquid
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, SnowQueen (59) wrote:

I love this.
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Jonas (715) wrote:

sneaky and kinda cubist... in the mind... i dunno, sometimes it's hard to describe what words do to me... these are lukewarm words, and they feel like they should be.
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

damn right!
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Very nice. Of course I love all of your work liquid. You never cease to make me smile. Or sad, whichever way the poem is written, or um....you get what I mean.