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True emptiness
By Methos
Listen closely to the crowded nothingness
It is there we find comfort in each others lies
Unreal faces stare at each other in bliss denial
Never listening yet always speaking
Inspiring wisdom in empty advice
Conversations of sweet gossip
Gaudy clothing; too loose or too tight
Each and all trying for the approval of the whole
The meaning of this is simple
Desire of acceptance
leads
to true emptiness
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Copyright 2003 Methos
Published on Monday, November 17, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, December 16, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175)
wrote:
a dark truth is written...........well done.....urban
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
****,i'm glad that suicide reffered you to me.eventhough i should've got off my ass and read you before that.thanks for sharing
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A former member wrote:
yea trying to fit in can be tough and some times leave u empty so to speak you showed the true emotion of those feelings
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On Saturday, January 10, 2004, unusual_blood
(74) wrote:
the truth has been told ...
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On Friday, January 2, 2004, sole
(93) wrote:
So paradoxically inspiring. Acceptance to emptiness, wisdom in ignorace. Excellent theme and I couldn't think of a better way to portray it. Great write.
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On Saturday, December 13, 2003, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
touche' this is so real....inspiring wisdom in empty advice...WOW
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A former member wrote:
lol Oh I love this...so so very true. For if you don't know one's self then you are truly without anything of your own...
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
"Each and all trying for the approval of the whole..." Wow...great work...kind of put's one in place....Loved this...~Delilah~
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, asailorsangel
(34) wrote:
Gets up out of my chair to pay tribute to this in which we all feel & you put into perspective...very nice
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
"Desire of acceptance leads to true emptiness", the truth here is like a slap in the face. Wanting to be part of the in crowd, but not being your true self, hiding who you are just so you can have friends that in truth don't even know the real you.
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
Very nice write, welcome to Dp.....O.
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On Monday, November 17, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
ahh i know so many people like that, great write
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On Monday, November 17, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
*claps* i agree with this. perfectly worded ~Drea~
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