Comments by Eladrim

  • "The point is the contrast, One I thought was an Angel (typically a being of light, hope, and all around goodness) led me into Hell (typically a place of pain and torment)"
    Posted by Eladrim on "My Angel" by Eladrim
  • "thnx, i couldn't think of anything to go with it that i liked so i left it only two lines"
    Posted by Eladrim on "My Angel" by Eladrim
  • "yeah i was experimenting with a choppy kinda rhyme...wasn't sure if it was gonna work or not"
    Posted by Eladrim on "My Last Wish" by Eladrim
  • "thanks for the comment, what you said was more than good enough because it's what you felt"
    Posted by Eladrim on "You" by Eladrim
  • "very true, and whatever we think we know is often false assumption"
    Posted by Eladrim on "Fate" by Eladrim
  • "thank you for the welcome, yes i figured everybody can understand how life is pain, if not they're lying to themselves"
    Posted by Eladrim on "A Life of Pain" by Eladrim
  • "The Crimson Queen- trying to improve my writing, what thoughts does it provoke? (anyone know why it won't let me reply?)"
    Posted by Eladrim on "A Life of Pain" by Eladrim
  • "I don't know why i can't reply to comments...so i'll do it this way. thanks for the welcome kristy and the approval WhiteHorse. As my profile states i'm very new at this so i appreciate comments"
    Posted by Eladrim on "Ice" by Eladrim
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