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The Price to Pay
By Eladrim
Striving against these power.
Surviving though my foe towers.
What price am I willing to pay
For just once chance, all my enemies to slay.
Menacing, I feel them come.
Why must I always run?
I try with all my will to fight,
But can only tremble at the sight.
An enemy that destroys without a care.
How can you kill what isn't there?
One minute they're right in front of me,
The next they're gone and i'm filled with uncertainty.
The truth is I can never win,
But to give up would be the gravest sin.
When i'm at the end and my will is broken,
For victory do I let my own soul darken?
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Copyright 2005 Eladrim
Published on Saturday, May 28, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
The enemy that you cant see i like this i fight you can never win very good
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A former member wrote:
More complicated than your other poems. I like it, though. The pain of no help and hopelessness captured in 4 stanzas..
-Salem
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On Sunday, August 28, 2005, abattoir
(115)
wrote:
and fuck is it expensive.nice piece.
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On Saturday, May 28, 2005, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
good question, will you?
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On Saturday, May 28, 2005, Eladrim
(47) wrote:
the other question is, is there really any other choice?
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