Comments by steuss
- "It took me a while to figure this out, but you captured the essence of what this poem is. the realization that we are a sum of everything, and wondering if that revelation will last... i think..."
Posted by steuss on "New Scars Remembered" by steuss
- "This gives me tingles. goosebumbs, etc. I LOVE the repeated Poise... line, along with the whole thing. There is almost a longing serenity in this. Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "The Samurai (a villanelle)" by manunkind
- "This is touching, the play of concrete and the natural setting, along with your images bring forth a vivid and captivating tale. Sadness at the end, but uplifting in its sincerity."
Posted by steuss on "An Ode To Dying Flowers" by BleedSilver
- "You describe your vision with impecable scrutiny. Those very details illustrate such vivid colors and images that each line is evoked from pure imagination. So very well done!"
Posted by steuss on "grand scale ablution" by manunkind
- "Are we all dead? Numbed to the point of pointless animation? I really enjoy your description and illustration of your images. Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "The Dead Above Ground" by Stormcomin
- "You do have an incredibly talent at conjuring images in your reader's minds. This was touching with its sincerity and honesty, glee and joy. So very well done! I love your alliteration."
Posted by steuss on "Black Spaghetti" by Carmina Gitana
- "I really really enjoy this poem. It is emotional flow of conciousness is invigorating, filled with saddness and regret, but touched with hope and strength. I'm glad to have read it, Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "The Shredded Paper Poem" by Carmina Gitana
- "I really enjoyed this, and thought your images and thoughts here came out incredibly well. =)"
Posted by steuss on "Sunk" by DarkReality
- "The way you wrote this is incredible and able to be viewed from multiple points. The :words: could be read alone and also could be descriptions of the speaker's emotions.... AMAZING! =)"
Posted by steuss on "Sunk" by DarkReality
- "This pulls at the heartstings and climbs its way in. Well done, both sincere and captivating, Wonderful, yet sad."
Posted by steuss on "friend of my beloved" by void
- "Produce? or Product? Nevertheless, this was simple. But embedded in that simplicity was the thought and power that makes Great poetry great. Your talent to take so few words and profess volumes is stunning. Well done"
Posted by steuss on "Leaf in the Wind" by Khyleria
- "Amazing flow thoughout this piece. I'm awed by its natural flow and rhyme. Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "Blood Lust " by Wren
- "The pleading simplicity in this does wonders to show that even the simplist gestures are meaningful. Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "Help!" by bLoOdYtEaRs
- "This was touching in its honesty. I particularly enjoy your alliteration, and the concept of the girl within the girl. Well done!"
Posted by steuss on "Girl Crying" by Jewelnique
- "This whole piece is so complete. I get the sense of loss with each line, without... each line is without something intangible, but that makes it full of meaning and beauty (in words at least) well done!"
Posted by steuss on "without......" by urbanhumility
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