Blood Lust

By Wren

Blood is dripping
Dripping down
Down the arm
Of the girl's white gown
She doesn't notice
Nor does he
They're too much
In ecstacy
Blood is dripping
Gushing out
Out the head
Of the talent scout
The future star
Got way pissed off
He got the gun
And shot it off
Blood is gushing
Squirting from
The retarded kid
Who's face is numb
He got too much
On his teacher's nerves
He had no patience
Left in reserve
Blood is running
From my hand
I'm writing faster
This book now damned.

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Published on Sunday, April 13, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Blood Lust "

On Thursday, March 17, 2005, steuss (92) wrote:

Amazing flow thoughout this piece. I'm awed by its natural flow and rhyme. Well done!
On Wednesday, December 24, 2003, Cwn Annwn (89) wrote:

Wow that was cool....that was wonderful..if I could I would favorite it..~GoNe~
A former member wrote: I feel quite left out without a favorites list but then again i love being different! 4 5 years about I wanted to be a vampire...this brings back my cravings...
On Tuesday, July 29, 2003, Sky Singer (153) wrote:

me too, me too! ...damn. i'd be happy if i just had the teeth.... but that would proably lead to... well... nevermind :) great write
On Wednesday, May 21, 2003, Saint_Reaper (200) wrote:

i will also add it to my favorites once i up grade
On Sunday, April 13, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (243) wrote:

I love this poem! I'm going to add it to my favorites. Outstanding job!