A Petal For Your Thoughts

By manunkind

The subtle light of spring creeping
like babies breath into the world,
enter: the birth and dawn of time.

Three white lilies in a vase
representing heaven, man and earth
(the only decor in a plane white room)

Whose desperate petals are scattered
upon a bed,
red roses soon to be disappointed potpourri

watered by the old woman,
hydrangeas replace the girls
who are women now

Birth and death and life
three poppies entangled in vine

Dead, black petals upon damp ground,
fall sweeps a tired old town.

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Ali Abraham
Published on Friday, October 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • steuss On Sunday, October 30, 2005, steuss (92)By person wrote:

    Like a complete circle you've twined together these words to paint an image of beauty. Well done!

  • a_deception_unto_myself On Sunday, October 9, 2005, a_deception_unto_myself (15)By person wrote:

    wow...speechless.if i could say more this would be a long flattering comment...but sometimes the best compliments are those that words cant be found to describe.

  • A former member wrote: you really just blow me away... my God!!! *panting* (oh god im having respitory problems) [not good]

  • A former member wrote: what more can i say to you? honestly. your poetry is amazing. my own words are meaningless in comparison. you may hate cali, but the poetry youre writing in cali is amazing.....

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