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Sunk
By DarkReality
Your eyes, your smile
:inhale:
The light that always surrounds you
:don’t breath:
protects me when I’m with you
:bleed:
I sink further into your essence
:through me:
Inescapable, the pain I love
:to my:
Afraid of rejection, more afraid of never knowing
:soul:
Could you ever love me
:wince:
With all my imperfections?
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Copyright 2005 DarkReality
Published on Friday, March 18, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Sin
(1168)
wrote:
i too liked the form and the pain in the last question...well written ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
again, good write...
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On Thursday, March 31, 2005, Elise
(188) wrote:
Feeling as you do with each line gave it that little extra something, well written ^_^
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On Thursday, March 31, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
imperfections.....hmmm what are those?.... who is to say you are not perfect, for perfect is just a word that someone made up/////
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A former member wrote:
I loved the way you structured this, with the subtle comments in between.. This tugged at my heart strings.. Well done.
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On Friday, March 18, 2005, steuss
(92) wrote:
The way you wrote this is incredible and able to be viewed from multiple points. The :words: could be read alone and also could be descriptions of the speaker's emotions.... AMAZING! =)
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On Friday, March 18, 2005, steuss
(92) wrote:
I really enjoyed this, and thought your images and thoughts here came out incredibly well. =)
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