[x]--Chocolate and Cigarettes--[x]

By murder_in_clubland

My eyes are wide open

Yet they feel glued shut

Cant see whats really happening

right infront of me.

You acted like you didn't know.

A shakespeare play

All is well that ends well

But you had no idea

not a clue...

Not a fucking clue

A simple breath taken

You took my heart away

and stored it in a small black box

let the maggots feed upon it...

Im nothing to you

your imagination

a doll to toy with

as you desire

Don't worry little one.

I'll let you play

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Copyright 2005 Stutterfly
Published on Thursday, April 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Friday, April 29, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Very beautiful. I could just imagine a heart in a box... with maggots feeding on it. Great write ~*~Tart~*~

  • A former member wrote: you really got the point across. i enjoyed it a lot

  • DarkReality On Thursday, April 28, 2005, DarkReality (7)By person wrote:

    Beautiful and eloquent...so fluid.. I absolutely love it!!

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, April 28, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    lovely hun..."You took my heart away and stored it in a small black box let the maggots feed upon it..." thats ouch!

  • A former member wrote: Nice read. "Im nothing to you your imagination a doll to toy with as you desire " conveys so much...

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