Girl Crying

By Jewelnique

Saddened heart crying crimson over and over again

Tears jerked back tightened lids

Never to show flooded foolishness of sorrow

Though happy as can be and overwhelmed with gladness glowing joy

There sits a girl crying in the shadowed corner within the rhythmic beating of me

She sits alone never to show her moistened eyes tired and lip quivered emotion

Do not disturb this beauty so blue

She sits saddened and yet content in her puddled anguish

The young woman which she is boxed within knows no sadness

But only grows stronger in laughter and juggled excitement

Googly goofiness of grandeur gladness

Is how she lives and yet happily and proud

So love me for me the young woman I may be but love the girl within as well

For she takes the pain I fear would drive me insane

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Copyright 2004 Jewelnique
Published on Saturday, November 13, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jaded Ireland On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, Jaded Ireland (26)By person wrote:

    yeah. . . what they said. . . beautiful. I really liked this.

  • steuss On Thursday, March 17, 2005, steuss (92)By person wrote:

    This was touching in its honesty. I particularly enjoy your alliteration, and the concept of the girl within the girl. Well done!

  • Savannah On Saturday, November 13, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    beautiful.. just beautiful

  • blue On Monday, November 29, 2004, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I agree...such a beautiful insight...I really don't know what else to say. Beautiful! B

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