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Girl Crying
By Jewelnique
Saddened heart crying crimson over and over again
Tears jerked back tightened lids
Never to show flooded foolishness of sorrow
Though happy as can be and overwhelmed with gladness glowing joy
There sits a girl crying in the shadowed corner within the rhythmic beating
of me
She sits alone never to show her moistened eyes tired and lip quivered
emotion
Do not disturb this beauty so blue
She sits saddened and yet content in her puddled anguish
The young woman which she is boxed within knows no sadness
But only grows stronger in laughter and juggled excitement
Googly goofiness of grandeur gladness
Is how she lives and yet happily and proud
So love me for me the young woman I may be but love the girl within as
well
For she takes the pain I fear would drive me insane
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Copyright 2004 Jewelnique
Published on Saturday, November 13, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, Jaded Ireland
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wrote:
yeah. . . what they said. . . beautiful. I really liked this.
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On Thursday, March 17, 2005, steuss
(92) wrote:
This was touching in its honesty. I particularly enjoy your alliteration, and the concept of the girl within the girl. Well done!
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On Saturday, November 13, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
beautiful.. just beautiful
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On Monday, November 29, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
I agree...such a beautiful insight...I really don't know what else to say. Beautiful! B
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