Untitled

By Kitt

If I was beautiful would you love me?
If I trapested around in black satin with my thorn crown held high and sunflower bruise embedded choker wrapped tight around my neck would you start to notice me or even pretend to care when I stood before you in that alone presence?
I doubt it... you never did before when I tried to play pretty...
Oh how lovely it would be though..
How lovely it would be if I could reincarnate myself for you from my now charred soul back to the cemetery's December powder...
Please.. let us play pretty again...?

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Published on Tuesday, November 2, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Untitled"

On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, Jaded Ireland (26) wrote:

very nice
On Saturday, November 19, 2005, Solitary Dreamer (24) wrote:

very cool :)
On Sunday, March 6, 2005, Metal Lullaby (47) wrote:

0_0
A former member wrote: few times before has morbidity been that beautiful.
A former member wrote: Interesting...
On Thursday, November 25, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428) wrote:

i had to come back to this, even though I've already commented. wonderful work kitt, some beautiful lines really stood out.."If I trapested around in black satin with my thorn crown held high"..wonderful
On Thursday, November 25, 2004, blue (1409) wrote:

very nice work! i especially love the last line! B.
On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Drea (1388) wrote:

Amazing imagrey. Very vivid. A lot of emotion as well. I'm glad I found your work. I hope you stay around I would love to keep reading what you post. Welcome to DP.
On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Kitt (17) wrote:

thank you, that's really flattering to hear someone wants to continue seeing my work. :) -kitt
A former member wrote: truly wonderful...welcome to DP and i hope u enjoy ur stay...~Bullet~
On Thursday, November 11, 2004, BleedSilver (298) wrote:

I have just stumbled upon your work, as I mostly do, and have come off better for reading this...It struck a chord in me that vibrates with rememberance...I have definately dealt with this before. You conveyed it so well, and is so few words.
On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Kitt (17) wrote:

:)
On Thursday, November 11, 2004, BleedSilver (298) wrote:

You did a great job. Welcome to DP, Kitt.
On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428) wrote:

nicely done.. and welcome to dp.. some great lines contained in this..
On Monday, November 8, 2004, Rone4611 (121) wrote:

liked very much! welcome, any questions click the little envelope in the bottom of my box
On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Kitt (17) wrote:

thnx, it's so nice to have such a warm welcome from people. :)
On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Revolting Theatre (31) wrote:

welcome to DP, excellent imagery. I like this piece. - Josh
On Sunday, November 7, 2004, Kitt (17) wrote:

thnx, that means a lot coming from you, josh.
On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, JiNx (98) wrote:

Welcome to DP and I like this poem quite good in my eyes.... -JiNx(ie)