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Help!
By bLoOdYtEaRs
If I asked
would you give?
If I cried
would you be there for me?
If I hurt myself
would you heal me?
If I wanted to die
would you ask me why?
Do you even care?
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Copyright 2004 Have_a_hissyfit87
Published on Wednesday, June 30, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, March 17, 2005, steuss
(92)
wrote:
The pleading simplicity in this does wonders to show that even the simplist gestures are meaningful. Well done!
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On Sunday, July 25, 2004, darkangelXlll
(107) wrote:
this is WAY better i really like this one and i read it with like this kinda rythem and it was good real good. i liked it this is like a totally different side i like it a lot nice. oh yeah a friend told me this "hold in there". ~darlin :)
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On Thursday, July 1, 2004, bLoOdYtEaRs
(9) wrote:
Thanxs guys...I'm a newbie on here!
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, Clementine
(121) wrote:
i sure don't
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A former member wrote:
Nice..I liked it a lot..'Grey
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
This definitely displays talent. Can't wait to read your next one. ~Midnight
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