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xXxGlass.Bottle.HeartxXx
By BleedSilver
My heart is a (glass) bottle,
The insides painted with my pain and misery,
Crimson in appearance,
Black in taste, easily broken, easily defaced.
Gunpowder was the flavor I tasted,
(not you, this bullet of guilt)
Explosive apathetic indifference
to the world and its fading ways…
Gossamer threads are the tenuous footholds
to my ethereal existence,
My isolated mind is but a shotgun shell away to freedom,
My mind is my shelter that shelters no faith,
For myself, or my heart.
Tears silver in the light of night,
Liquid metallic dreams and shattered hearts,
Swept up in the wishes and broken promises I made just yesterday...
My heart is a broken glass bottle.
I beg of you now, with my eyes of swirling darkness,
My touch a fleeting whisper of words I cannot speak,
My presence a dark spot on your heart forevermore,
I hand you the remenants of the bottle that was my heart.
Take it back to destroy again...
Only this time, it won't hurt me the way it does now.
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Copyright 2005 BleedSilver
Published on Friday, March 18, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "xXxGlass.Bottle.HeartxXx"
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On Sunday, June 26, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222)
wrote:
this was beautiful. great imagery tied in with heartfelt emotion. lovely...
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On Sunday, June 12, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
I'm in pure awe.. ::Speechless::
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On Friday, March 18, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
loverly...
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A former member wrote:
wow man great shit i loved this FAV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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On Friday, March 18, 2005, avlar
(24) wrote:
nice. especialy the line, "My isolated mind is but a shotgun shell away to freedom"
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A former member wrote:
mmm bullet of guilt. Loved the way you worded this piece.. Excellent visions. Thank you.
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On Friday, March 18, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
"Gunpowder was the flavor I tasted, (not you, this bullet of guilt)" loved that....damn, you still amaze me with your poetry..keep it up!
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On Friday, March 18, 2005, steuss
(92) wrote:
The first stanza in this is pure beauty. I'm astounded at your ability to create such vivid images! Such an inspiring and frightful piece.
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