Never love a friend

By empty_love


High emotions,
nights full of laughs,
secretes always unfold,
things pass;

If you love a friend,
you'll be in for a high-tide ride;

Emotions get higher,
like snow caps on mountains
hiding your pains and fears;

Nights once full of reminising stories
are substituted for stressful sex

Secrets build into high tyrant empires,
every bump in the road is amplified
like towers that block the sun;

By the time the snow has melted,
and the towers have fallen
everything is lost....
its sand in the twisted wind

So if you value your heart
and a dear friend,
never love them more,
than just a friend.

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Copyright 2005 empty_love (Julie)
Published on Tuesday, February 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Gorgeous and heart wrenching ♡

  • A former member wrote: Wow, this is beautifully written, I love it... This brings back painful memories. They may be painful, but they are interesting once you look back on them..

  • Malice In Wonderland On Sunday, April 10, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    heh, ain't this the truth. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Never love a friend, aint that the truth? I think too many people have found that out the hard way! :( I really liked the piece tho. Scholar

  • BleedSilver On Thursday, March 10, 2005, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    man...this is simply heartwrenching emotion at its purest. Pain, and truth, I dare to say. I can't think of a time I have ever dated a real good friend that has went well...This deserves a fav.

  • happilydepressed On Thursday, March 10, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    this is going on my favs

  • happilydepressed On Thursday, March 10, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    awesome write and true, i love my best freind but as a higher being, a goddess, and i'm not worthy of her love, that can really mess up a friendship

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