Comments by Anth
- "great write here man, the gaps between byour works are longer at moment but the precision is still there, to get straight to teh point and create a scene with just the right words for full effect that the reader has to do less work to become emerged in your words, i can only mention that it was a pleasure to read, like the uplifting emotional moment at the climax of a ten minute instrumental"
Posted by Anth on "div.ision" by Six-Out
- "i read this when it was first posted and remember thinking, how fortunate i was to be able to read such a great poem that morning but that i didnt know how to comment, so i left it silent and thankful and just thought that i should comment as i came back to read this today and loved it just as much"
Posted by Anth on "with black on gray" by Six-Out
- "i know i like a poem, when i think of it on days my mind is clear of all thoughts, the ending of this especially, memorable, and meaning a lot to me"
Posted by Anth on "old oceans" by Six-Out
- "many writers, myself included; have used various metaphors for burning thier work, i used 'a kind ofvsuicide' in a recent work but this is the first time im sure, that someone has said symbolic back button and its a brilliant modern metaphor. i think youve expressed before existence as past tense and its something thats always struck me yet hard to wrap your mind around, i think because a lot of us are caught up in our past too much to move on, everything becomes memory, dreams..expendable..this was a poem with purpose and impactm the last verse resonates.. the title made me think of jackson pollock"
Posted by Anth on "monet would vomit." by Six-Out
- "since your new post *diamond* i read through all the she spoke poems again, i love them, i hope you post more in the future"
Posted by Anth on "she spoke pearl" by Six-Out
- "this is epic, your poetry reminds me of a noir movie, the way you use language. your poetry is spoken more distinctly than most because of the style. everything is heightened and that makes it really jump out of the page at you. it forces you into the mindset and makes every poetic word important."
Posted by Anth on "something like glass hammers." by Six-Out
- "that moves you in a calm but shattering way, this is one of those poems that reaafirms you as a poet, that you can read back to yourself if ever you lack inspiration and realise its always within and not around you."
Posted by Anth on "[ink&powder]" by Six-Out
- "it does. and resonates. like cracked mirror images of nights you remember as vivid but seem more and more unreal as time passes, this poem reflects and pieces together those fragments in a way "
Posted by Anth on "[ink&powder]" by Six-Out
- "I love most the ending to this. from the neon lights she calls home. such atmosphere in few verses.it builds up and then utterly crashes down both bleak and beautiful. I love the dramaticness. the over emphasis of all the small details. like what rain doe"
Posted by Anth on "she spoke sapphire" by Six-Out
- " remember when we were going to write that collab. we had something in common at the time to write of. strange how things worked out. although perhaps inevitable. I sometimes feel poets have their own kind of fate "
Posted by Anth on "beautiful monsters [of elegant kisses]" by Six-Out
- "you always manage to keep that sense of melancholic grandeur in your poetry, however bitter or beautiful it is, and its always instantly recognizeable as yours, yet never predictable, always immense"
Posted by Anth on "myths need mystery [we're all liars]" by Six-Out
- "it may sound dramatic to view life as negative,but we all have those moments where it seems like theres nothing..this write really captures that so well"
Posted by Anth on "[living is cliche]" by Six-Out
- "seems like,the more you open your eyes to the world,the more the world leaves you blind,the higher you dream,the further you fall,"
Posted by Anth on "[living is cliche]" by Six-Out
- "exquisite, and really thought out,the repeating of :words: gives it an extra edge,very well constructed"
Posted by Anth on "murder lead with ink" by Six-Out
- "id say this was one of your best,until your next post i guess,stunning poetry here though"
Posted by Anth on "-tears. of_ lead" by Six-Out
- "these last few works from you have taken on a new style and direction,thats progression and theyre gettin better n better,superlative writing here,also your creativity stands out more in this style"
Posted by Anth on "Pier Glass" by Six-Out
- "of your more recent works i think this is my fave,the whole work,masterful,combining many of your qualities in new directions,equals an utterly superb poem"
Posted by Anth on "Forgotten No One" by Six-Out
- "this is a killing write man,u set the mood perfectly with your wording as ever so that it can nest itself right into our thoughts,the harsh truths and observations that you present,with style and mastery, especially brilliant write here"
Posted by Anth on "Livid Instancies" by Six-Out
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