Comments by Peyton1
- "Only the lucky chosen few get to experience "always and forever" I think. Your words describe these scenes so well I could actually envision it as I read, but I imagine that is as close as I'll ever get of experiencing it. Great write Sean, I enjoyed this piece. Later............................ ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Always and Forever" by Sean Mc Shane
- "That was really well done Sean, took me on a journey ya did. This one runs deep, doesn't it? Beyond devastating, yeah I know that feeling too. To miss someone that deeply, the love had to have been almost unimaginably strong. I miss someone like that still as well. Awesome job dude, as always.............. ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Our Everything" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Wow dude.....just....damn! You had my attention with the first line! ('Them' capitalized) After that it was visual excellence wrapped with emotion intense enough to nearly overwhelm as I read through the lines. Nothing I can say will be worthy of such a magnificent work. The ending got me, and you get a 10. A very powerful write Sean, thank you for posting this........................ ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on " Our Moon" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Your pen intertwines paths like none other, always a pleasure to read your work. Glad you're back around, I like the journeys that your works lay out. Thanks for sharing this one............. ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "When I Think Of You" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Hey Sean, haven't seen anything from you in a while and nearly missed this one. If I read correctly between the lines, that sucks and I'm sorry to hear it. Personally, I'd rather the dawn not come at all, than to bring with it the end of the dream. Drop me a line sometime, later dude................... ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Soul Search" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Damn it all, Sean, I started to well up at the end of this! You have such a gift, the power you put into this piece was staggering! I am left completely awestricken.............and awaiting poem #2...........LOVED it."
Posted by Peyton1 on "One Thousand in One Thousand" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Yep, you're right, you DO know how to get lost.....It's quite beautiful that far out though, I think. "I've seen the bent rift of the fading Under Horizon
alluring and treacherous, yet so utterly amazing" , If you get stuck in that rift, we're gonna have a hard time pulling you back............It's a deep one! Cool read, write on my friend! "
Posted by Peyton1 on "Twilight Star" by Sean Mc Shane
- "There's only one kind of love that feels like that! You capture it's essence so well with this soft side of your pen... Very much enjoy a good love story once in a while, the little things are important........."
Posted by Peyton1 on "The Little Things" by Sean Mc Shane
- "...Damn!...I can't even say how I feel after that, there really aren't words. That was one of the most powerful poems I have ever read, I am in awe............................"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Epic Ending" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Just......Damn!! You had me at to-yester-morrow-day! This is an awesome write. I imagine if there were a way to perfectly describe existence in a time rift....you just nailed it! The play on words intertwining past, present, and future as one time frame was mind boggling! And you made it look so easy. Hats off to you, MUCH enjoyed this work. Thanks for posting it."
Posted by Peyton1 on "Today is Tomorrow, Yesterday is Just Ahead" by Sean Mc Shane
