Comments by Mute Serenade
- "I love the concept of this. Such a short poem, but not a single word wasted or misplaced. Everything here speaks with purpose and it's lovely. You've created imagery from a world away with this one. :) "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "The Ghosts Of Flowers" by carlosjackal
- "And this concludes my journey through the top ten! What a blissful note to finish on. Great imagery... It's great to find something short yet so satisfying. "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "A Butterfly's Soul" by carlosjackal
- "Soul moves the moon. If orbit is a function of time I'd rather believe she's moving that :) beautiful poem."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Hope" by carlosjackal
- "I'm going to fever rant for a min.... Maybe I'll see turns me towards the sunshine scribbler variety.... This is the most actionable position... Because to get to the eye means you already traveled half the distance, doesn't it? Before I had my daughter I'd read loads of labor accounts that said labor only began to ease and progress when you give over to the pain. You entirely, unequivocally give up fighting it and just let it happen. So, concession isn't always a bad thing, and journeying once more into the breach isn't either :) yay fever!"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Dire Reflections " by SolApathy
- "This is magic. This might be one of my favs from you... it also reminds me of the rain scene from V for Vendetta, like that level of intensity? Amazing dude."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Secrets of the rain" by SolApathy
- "Anna nailed it... Immensely soothing... The imagery here is vivid, calling and beautiful :) excellent excellent write, you sunshine scribbler you ;)"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Azure Dreams" by SolApathy
- "Bravo.. how to brave to have the foresight and continue anyway. I spent a decade oblivious... Arguably better that way. Passion does cauterize. Beautiful concept that I'll carry long after some of these words fade. Brilliant write."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Cauterized " by SolApathy
- "I don't feel qualified to leave something as meaningful as this deserves. This is beautiful, simply stated. And one of my favorites from you. "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Searing Blue" by carlosjackal
- "*hands sol a blanket* this reminds me of the end of NMH's "oh comely" for some reason.... We're all crawling inside the stomach of winter maybe? Idk. The metaphor escapes me, hahahaha. Awesome piece!"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "...Fatalities of the Frozen " by SolApathy
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