Comments by Alanarchy

  • ""Her voice a cancer = and she's a cigarette that begs to be lit. Screaming:" That line put a big shit eating grin on my face. Hell yeah, man. Mighty, mighty fine."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "she spoke tangerine." by Six-Out
  • "Jon-boy, I never rate anything if it isn't a ten. If there was an eleven on that bar, you'd get it easy. Dude, you crumble mountains with a pen. Those last two stanzas were simply breathtaking. I have them memorized. Your something else, man."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "oil to flame [and star studded ashes]" by Six-Out
  • "And, yeah. I did think the spanish read like silk. Beautiful. But I didn't get a lick besides a few words. Any chance you can send a translation my way, dog? If not, i'll work it out. Once again, man. Loved it."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "speakershine. [ten years too late]" by Six-Out
  • "Gone, ten years. I think Brad would have cringed at the world we're living in. Oh well. The music goes unchanged even if the good word goes unspoken. Six, you are smooth fire, daddy-o. Loved it. Faving it."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "speakershine. [ten years too late]" by Six-Out
  • "Jesus... I logged in specifically to comment on this work, but now, as I reach to find the words I may as well be gropeing for the moon. You got to me here, man. Just phenomonal. "
    Posted by Alanarchy on "blink-breathe-repeat" by Six-Out
  • "and words can be daggers *but they're throwing bullets- and we're left hiding. under the sun starched skies. left with starless goodbyes.* I wasn't prepared for this, man. words ride on your shoulder."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "bang [you're dead]" by Six-Out
  • "*help. Pride can be a bitch. But then again, people in other parts of the world deal with stuff most people could never imagine. But they fight to hold on to life. after seeing what some go through and still carry on... what excuse does one have to ta"
    Posted by Alanarchy on "My Suicide Rant (revised)" by Six-Out
  • "And it hurts to call those people weak. It is true that some of us have it worse then others. Still... There's always someone who can help you. Maybe in that way, they are weak... They're unable to admit to other's that they've failed or that they need"
    Posted by Alanarchy on "My Suicide Rant (revised)" by Six-Out
  • "People, don't kill yourselves. I mean, c'mon. Call me crazy, but I doubt there can be anything to gain. Only deep loss. For yourself, and your loved ones. And besides. When your at rock bottom, there's no place to go but up."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "My Suicide Rant (revised)" by Six-Out
  • "I hadn't planned on logging in. But I can't leave without telling you how much this floored me. Your composition, your content... Just amazing man. I need to get my account payed so I can bookmark this."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "Aspyxiation (battle for the truth)" by Six-Out
  • "Just reread. Man, I swear to god, everytime I read this I get chills. You are a master."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "Nevermind" by Six-Out
  • "Wow. Very powerful work. Truly a sad day that was. "kurt Cobain is dead" You took me right back. this kicked untold amounts of ass. Its going on my favs."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "Nevermind" by Six-Out
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