Comments by CharlottesWeb
- "This is cunning....under cut and I'm all too happy not to be on the recieving end! It's this thick cloud of contempt/disgust all smoothed out and slapped on the person. Very clever...very poetic with beauty as always.~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "A Poet's Heart" by cre
- "Your words are cold lace here. Grace dancing on a snow flakes crystal. So cold and silent...waiting for that storm of nothing that will bring something. ~bites lip~ I don't know what to say. It sounds repetitive to say....oh I love this....but "Oh I love "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "hurry January" by cre
- "it's wholeness down to 32 words while expanding on every aspect of it. Absolutely amazing, intentionally wonderful. I feel so drawn and wispful after reading this. I love your work; it always leaves me thinking with my feelings instead of my head. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "my place" by cre
- "Is it exhaustion, or experience the controller of our conclusions and acceptations? I think the answer could make all the diff in the world to wear one ends. You have taken a gigantic philosophical/psychological concept; tamed it into metaphor and thinned"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "my place" by cre
- "Some times I wonder, is the poet looking for the feelings inspired in the reader by the poem, or a correct relation from the reader to what the poem means to the author? For me...this is slipping time into a puddle of mirrored present actions. I really li"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Slipping Time" by cre
- "Sigh...Sharon summarized it perfectly. I could not think of the right words. Yes...time is what we have and it is everything yet only perception and so nothing to those who don't let it be something. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Slipping Time" by cre
- "Wit at its best! hehe...of course I had to go back and reread a second time just for a full belly laugh. Funnier yet...hehe...I did that once! Got mad and chopped off my hair!! hehe...I loved this! ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Admittedly a Cutter" by cre
- "Mmm...I shouldn't be...I should be use to it by now...but still, I find myself in awe with the natural and fluent flow of every poem. This silvery smooth work of ended resistance had me drawn to my screen...3x. Beautiful...absolutely Beautiful.~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "blood runs down my face" by cre
- "Just enough...Just enough to get the point across in a quiet...lip pressing way. For what it's worth...I agree. Although I hold out hope for the future I'm not in...I agree fully for the world I'm living in right now. Expressed very...post apocaliptic...I"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "anarchy?" by cre
- "~gapes~ Every time I read, I want to say this is my fav, this is the best...but this is the first time I've wanted to say "this is more powerful then....anything I can compare it with." Spirits...I'm speechless. The feelings, visuals...absolute transforma"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "The Sun That Morning" by cre
- "Some times I miss the clarity this poem forces on memory...and then I'm bitterly grateful for not having it. Extrodinary work, you make the perception come alive, and in such a silent, thoughtful and warm way. ~JMDW~ "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "There Is (No Meaning)" by cre
- "Death of some one or something lingers just below visability. Space and time, one and the same have no name no place in life when perceptions and feelings swing this way...and when they do, OH DO THEY make since!"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "There Is (No Meaning)" by cre
- "I'm always amazed at how your words feel as thought they just flowed from you without editing or thought...just feelings. I feel soft darkness...and a mellow but horrindous ending. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Remembrance Goodbye" by cre
- "Connections run deep, long and forever when their "really" made. You displayed this so well. I know that the word "beautiful" is used so often on your work it might at times begin to as if it's lost it's appeal as a compliment...however...that is exactly "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "I Remembered Your Birthday" by cre
- "Some times it really feels like this doesn't it. You pour everything and anything out...to the avail of nothing. You've not moved earth nore redirected the wind Cre...but you have moved hearts and affected perceptions. This I know. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "there are no flowers" by cre
- "Curious feeling. So beautiful...your greif is in this work...that I find my self wishing to be in it...just to expereince the extraordinary sensations of something so....~shrugs~ beautiful. ~JM~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Whisper Goodbye" by cre
- "My tongue loved this. Undying, unresignated misery without chance of escape...but with a resistance born of something unkown, unsaught...just there. I like...you are a brilliant one. ~JM~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "watch the clock" by cre
- "...texture. You complemented with that summary smell of freshly cut grass, with a back drop of shadowy fighting figures in the window. Oh this was amazing. I love it. ~JM~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "The Stones (Part I)" by cre
- "ooo....aaaa;) The meter and rhyme in this fell into place as if by an angels own handl they were chisled from creations storm. I can't imagine a sigle word in a differrent way...it came to gather so well! You gave texture...smooth...concrete grain...cool."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "The Stones (Part I)" by cre
- "mmm... my eyes are a little blurred now...and I can smell the oncoming tears. This must be the saddest thing I've read. How do you splay this out so well when it's so close to you? ~JM~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "When I Lost" by cre
- "I read once, twice and every time find different pictures....but all the same in function. Changing in time we'll never be ourselves again...and we can only chronicle(sp?) the moment in a line of poetry. You've given me this thought for now...quiet, peace"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Things Change" by cre
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