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Comments by FadedBlues

"wel done. misery & loss of hope..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Lost Youths" by DeafSoldier

"...this is good. the agony of a man & woman separated by war; we know it too well..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Soldier's Dream" by DeafSoldier

"...WWI, in the shadow of Wilfred Owen. attack & die..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Sights of War" by DeafSoldier

"...great title. brutal & fascinating, the history of war..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Used To Be So Young" by DeafSoldier

"...it's a stark vision, but spoken in a calm way, as if preparing an escape plan..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Walk of Hell" by DeafSoldier

"...nicely done. you're never the same after you've been thru it..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Survivor's Guilt" by DeafSoldier

"...great write ,Soldier. put that final stanza in quotes, to present it properly..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Gates of Fire" by DeafSoldier

"...a great picture of 1 warrior bidding farewell to another. he is beyond hurting..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "ÐœÐ¾Ð¹ Ð³ÐµÑ€Ð¾Ð¹ (My Hero)" by DeafSoldier

"...good war story. always drawn to the battle, despite its repulsion..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "First days in Stalingrad" by DeafSoldier

"...brings back memories of Owen's WWI poetry. different locations & weapons, same horror..."
Posted by FadedBlues on ""War is Hell"" by DeafSoldier

"...it's good atmosphere, the bruised battleground, the cannons roaring, all the horror of it..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The State" by DeafSoldier

"..it's a good lyric & a great tribute..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Katyusha! In English and Russian (READ AUTHOR'S NOTE)" by DeafSoldier

"I think we did a fine tribute here, Soldier. we spoke a few words for those who are silent..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Ghosts of Arlington (With FadedBlues)" by DeafSoldier

"...it's a good poem, it just leaves me wondering: did God also welcome those whom the soldier killed?..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Soldier and God" by DeafSoldier

"...almost in the style of a Grimm fairy tale, & fitting that it brings such to mind..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Sandy Hook Tribute" by DeafSoldier

"...nice trib. we won't forget..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Pearl Harbor" by DeafSoldier

"..it has happened many times, & will happen again. all we can do is weep, & record it in poems..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Lost Love" by DeafSoldier

"...in the last stanza, 2nd line the correct structure would be 'he can speak no more' or 'he cannot speak any more' to avoid the double negative. otherwise, excellent, Soldier... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Veteran" by DeafSoldier

"...the ending couldn't be more passionately expressed..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Memoir of a WWI Soldier" by DeafSoldier

"...I'm a vet. this is great,man. your research was thorough. obviously, it puts me in mind of Wilfred Owen..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Memoir of a WWI Soldier" by DeafSoldier

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