First days in Stalingrad

By DeafSoldier

They crammed me into the train
Traveled miles, stuck in a boxcar with my comrades.
Through the little window, I saw the Volga
And in the middle, a city shrouded in smoke and flame.

They pulled me out, crammed me into the boat
"For Stalin," they said, "for the Motherland!"
I stood next to my brother
As the smoke of the city loomed over us.

I hear the roar of planes
I look up, the Stukas are diving towards us.
I hear the chatter of machine guns and the screams of men.
My brother lay on me, but I feel his blood.

I look at his body, holes in his tunic.
The Commissar dumps it over the boat, "we need space."
As we arrive, I feel a bloodlust
Revenge, for my dead brother.

I'm in line to get a rifle
The man in front of me got one.
"If you get a rifle, find a man with a clip. If you have a clip, get a rifle!"
They gave me a clip instead of a rifle.

I run, dodging bullets and shells
Jumping from one crater to the next.
I found a rifle, I load it,
And then I spot the Fascists.

I take aim, at their head and hearts,
But as I look through the sights
I see, out of the corner of my eyes, a flash.
I quickly aim at it, then I see another.

I fall back, hole in my chest
I'm soaked with blood
I lay there, moaning.. Dying
I didn't get the Germans.

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Copyright 2013 DeafSoldier
Published on Wednesday, August 14, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Dedicated to my great-great uncle.
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  • bobbery On Thursday, August 15, 2013, bobbery (124)By person wrote:

    Very good. mens survival instinct Is stronger then any moral or social apprehention he might have

  • DeafSoldier On Friday, August 16, 2013, DeafSoldier (38)By person wrote:

    I agree. That is actually how the Red Army did things in Stalingrad in the beginning.

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, August 15, 2013, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    ...good war story. always drawn to the battle, despite its repulsion...

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, August 14, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    wonderful pen, I was biting my nails through to the end! great write!

  • DeafSoldier On Wednesday, August 14, 2013, DeafSoldier (38)By person wrote:

    Thank you(:

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