The State

By DeafSoldier

I sit in the muddy trench,
A shell laughs, the raw men ducked.
Big guns belched, the green men cried.
I just sat there, grinning vividly,
Laughing, as the young boys stumbled.

We go out, out over there,
Across the crater-stricken graveyard,
Ta-ta-ta-ta.... ta-ta-ta... The guns chuckled.
My men fell... I crawl back, blood-shot eyes.
Staring into space, shaking with adrenaline.

I sit around, staring into nowhere,
The haunting grin turns to laughter.
The soldiers look upon me, asking
"How long were you here? How old are you?"
I stare at them, grinning, "three months, mate.
I am nineteen."

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Copyright 2013 DeafSoldier
Published on Friday, August 2, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This came to me in a nightmare.
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  • FadedBlues On Saturday, August 3, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...it's good atmosphere, the bruised battleground, the cannons roaring, all the horror of it...

  • DeafSoldier On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, DeafSoldier (38)By person wrote:

    I always have these dreams. I don't know why

  • A former member wrote: I Didn't Get It,, But It's The Acknowledgement That Matters Right.?

  • Devilish On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I hate nightmares i have them all the time. this one is truly horrid.. hugs baby. Scholar

  • DeafSoldier On Saturday, August 3, 2013, DeafSoldier (38)By person wrote:

    I have nightmares all the time too. That's where i get the ideas for most of the WWI poems.

  • DeafSoldier On Saturday, August 3, 2013, DeafSoldier (38)By person wrote:

    Yaaaay hugs

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