The State
By DeafSoldier
I sit in the muddy trench,
A shell laughs, the raw men ducked.
Big guns belched, the green men cried.
I just sat there, grinning vividly,
Laughing, as the young boys stumbled.
We go out, out over there,
Across the crater-stricken graveyard,
Ta-ta-ta-ta.... ta-ta-ta... The guns chuckled.
My men fell... I crawl back, blood-shot eyes.
Staring into space, shaking with adrenaline.
I sit around, staring into nowhere,
The haunting grin turns to laughter.
The soldiers look upon me, asking
"How long were you here? How old are you?"
I stare at them, grinning, "three months, mate.
I am nineteen."
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Copyright 2013 DeafSoldier
Published on Friday, August 2, 2013.
Filed under:
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Author's Note:
This came to me in a nightmare.Comments on "The State"
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...it's good atmosphere, the bruised battleground, the cannons roaring, all the horror of it...
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
I always have these dreams. I don't know why
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A former member wrote:
I Didn't Get It,, But It's The Acknowledgement That Matters Right.?
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I hate nightmares i have them all the time. this one is truly horrid.. hugs baby.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
I have nightmares all the time too. That's where i get the ideas for most of the WWI poems.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
Yaaaay hugs