The Veteran
By DeafSoldier
As I walked in the store,
I saw a legless Marine,
Medals on
his chest, smile on his face.
As he told me his tale,
Into
his eyes I looked,
The dreaded thousand yard stare,
As the memories
came back, it overtook.
Memories of death, gunfire, dead friends,
Overtook this poor man's soul.
It seemed going home in a box was
the only end,
Laying in the sand, as the tide rolled.
An
explosion was heard,
Marines started rushing,
Lusting for gore,
Overwhelming the enemy,
Lusting for more.
He looked away,
tear in his eye,
He can speak no more,
The memories of his
brothers, who died,
In service for their country, Semper Fi.
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Copyright 2013 DeafSoldier
Published on Tuesday, January 22, 2013.
Filed under:
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Author's Note:
Dedicated to the fallen.Comments on "The Veteran"
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On Wednesday, January 23, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...in the last stanza, 2nd line the correct structure would be 'he can speak no more' or 'he cannot speak any more' to avoid the double negative. otherwise, excellent, Soldier...
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On Wednesday, January 23, 2013, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
Ah, I just noticed it. Thank you! I'll make the corrections.
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On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
I have many family members in the service, you captured the war they bring home in their hearts, well done. 10/10
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On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
My father-in-law and my father served our country God bless the USA,
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On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
I feel ashamed that I can't carry my family's tradition of military service (I'm deaf). God bless the USA!