The Veteran

By DeafSoldier

 As I walked in the store,
I saw a legless Marine,
Medals on his chest, smile on his face.

As he told me his tale,
Into his eyes I looked,
The dreaded thousand yard stare,
As the memories came back, it overtook.

Memories of death, gunfire, dead friends,
Overtook this poor man's soul.
It seemed going home in a box was the only end,
Laying in the sand, as the tide rolled.

An explosion was heard,
Marines started rushing,
Lusting for gore,
Overwhelming the enemy,
Lusting for more.

He looked away, tear in his eye,
He can speak no more,
The memories of his brothers, who died,
In service for their country, Semper Fi.

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Copyright 2013 DeafSoldier
Published on Tuesday, January 22, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Dedicated to the fallen.
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  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, January 23, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...in the last stanza, 2nd line the correct structure would be 'he can speak no more' or 'he cannot speak any more' to avoid the double negative. otherwise, excellent, Soldier...

  • DeafSoldier On Wednesday, January 23, 2013, DeafSoldier (38)By person wrote:

    Ah, I just noticed it. Thank you! I'll make the corrections.

  • deathndismay On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, deathndismay (92)By person wrote:

    I have many family members in the service, you captured the war they bring home in their hearts, well done. 10/10

  • PoetessDarkly On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    My father-in-law and my father served our country God bless the USA,

  • DeafSoldier On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, DeafSoldier (38)By person wrote:

    I feel ashamed that I can't carry my family's tradition of military service (I'm deaf). God bless the USA!

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