Memoir of a WWI Soldier
By DeafSoldier
They sent me to France,
A beautiful foreign land,
Torn apart
by trenches and warfare.
The war lasted years, its people are tired,
It is an ugly, ugly affair.
My friend fought at the Somme,
His brother had fallen and was gone.
Perished gasping for air and
his mask,
In the midst of the mustard gas.
The artilley
fired shells,
The Five-Nines flew over.
It was a sight, a sight
of hell,
Seeing the explosions and gas.
I dreaded that
command,
I was scared to hear those words.
It sent us to our
peril,
Over the top, rushing to the woods.
It came, the
command.
The captain shouted, "over the top!"
Men died, it was
a massacre.
I can only wish my own children,
May never see this
carnage.
I ran to my trench,
So few survived.
To
run across No Man's Land,
Was pure suicide.
I thought
about Death,
How it feels to die.
I'm afraid it'll hurt,
I don't want to struggle,
I don't want to squirm on the ground,
bleeding,
Till life drains out.
As we marched though the
trench,
We ducked from the rockets,
Scary, screaming minnie exploded,
Too many lives, it pryed.
We went over once more,
To
take the Hun's land away.
I saw many carnage, many gore.
We
put our masks on, as we met the Huns.
We were locked in hand
to hand combat.
I saw my friend. He had a hole in his stomach.
I tripped on roots as a Hun watched.
He ran over with his bayonet,
fury in his eyes,
Stood above me, didn't look older than twenty.
My life flashed in front of me,
From when I learned how to
swim,
To when I graduated boot camp,
From when they sent me to
France,
To fight in a foreign war.
The Hun's gaze hardened,
His muscles tightened,
As he prepared to kill.
He stabbed
me once, and again
Many holes in my body,
As my life drained
away.
I was left in the mud,
As my comrades pushed on.
I stood by the Gates to meet them,
As they arrived in bunches.
Comments on "Memoir of a WWI Soldier"
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A former member wrote:
wow! very good! thank you for your service!
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On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
A moment of silence from me for the many fallen soldiers in all wars.. Such primitive murder should be left to apes with stones... Excellent account of the horrifying death of a soldier. 10/10
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On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I have a grandfather who was in WW2, so the world wars have always been a source of interest to me. This was tragically beautiful. The sorrow.... My head is bowed to you sir. I am left in silence for these words....
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On Tuesday, January 22, 2013, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
I had several relatives who have fought in WWII and WWI. Thank you very much.
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A former member wrote:
This really makes you think about what a soldier during the war would be thinking. I definitely felt some deep emotion while reading this. Great job. =)
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On Monday, January 21, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...I'm a vet. this is great,man. your research was thorough. obviously, it puts me in mind of Wilfred Owen...
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On Monday, January 21, 2013, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
Wilfred Owen actually inspired me to write this. There's a scene in Dulce et Decorum Est where there's a soldier who dies in a gas attack. The brother in this poem was actually supposed to be that soldier. Thank you for your service, by the way.
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On Monday, January 21, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...the ending couldn't be more passionately expressed...
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A former member wrote:
i absolutely loved it, the prose was very clean and honest..reminded me of "All Quite in western front" ...looking forward to read more :)
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On Monday, January 21, 2013, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
All Quiet on the Western Front is one of my favorite poems of all time.