Lost Love
By DeafSoldier
John met a girl named Mary,
John fell in love instantly,
John
told her, "You'll be mine to marry."
John left to join the
Army,
He said, "I'll be back, I'll be a man."
He left her feeling
all bluey,
As he left to answer the call of duty.
Three
months past, John came to Mary,
Took a knee and gave her a ring,
And said, "will you be mine to marry?"
She said, "yes," and he
took her under his wing.
John recieved his orders,
Off
to Afghanistan he has to go.
He promised his girl he'll be back,
As he departed for the combat zone.
As he went on patrol,
On alert with his gun,
A sniper popped from nowhere,
John's
war ended as quick as it begun.
Like thousands before him,
He gave his life for his country,
Paid with his life, the cost
of freedom.
As he lays in state,
Over his coffin, the flag
is draped.
As Mary reads her letter, sinking,
To the ground,
heart deflates.
With a tear going down her cheek,
"You're
my love," she says, "I'll never forget."
As he's laid to rest, his
war finally ends.
Author's Note:
Symbolic poem of the couples who lost their families because of war.Comments on "Lost Love"
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On Monday, August 21, 2017, Just Dave
(448) wrote:
Wow. From tender to terrible. I like a poem that tells a story. Sad, very sad. Wonderful poem. JD
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On Monday, August 21, 2017, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
Thank you! :)
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On Monday, May 27, 2013, mysterylove
(97) wrote:
I like the way it flows- heartbreaking at the same time..
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On Thursday, January 24, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
..it has happened many times, & will happen again. all we can do is weep, & record it in poems...
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On Thursday, January 24, 2013, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I had a really close friend go to the army last year. He came back a month ago. I never cried so hard as when he left. I was lucky that time. About the same time said friend left, about a month later, another friend of mine left. It's been 11 months. No word.... This was close to home for me.
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On Friday, January 25, 2013, DeafSoldier
(38) wrote:
I want to join the Marine Corps, but I can't cause of my deafness. I hope your friend comes back alive and well.
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On Friday, January 25, 2013, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
Makes two of us.... I'm sorry you can't follow your dreams. But hey... there's a reason you're staying here. Just don't know what it is yet. You'll find out someday. Until then, keep ya chin up. You're tough, you can do it. *wink*
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On Wednesday, January 23, 2013, deathndismay
(92) wrote:
You have the ability to perfectly portray the pain of war, loss, and service.. I enjoy your talent highly! 10/10
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A former member wrote:
Dazzling, yet breaks my heart... Damned war... Why can't the countries just cooperate with each other? If they did, so many good men, TRUE soldiers, would still be alive. It seems that true heroes are always murdered and crooken one get the rewards... Oh, I digress. A poem to cherish.