Soldier's Dream

By DeafSoldier

I walk slowly down the path
Along with my love, my woman, hand in hand.
Her light, pale skin is pure and flawless,
Like a long evening's first morning light.

We have smiles together as we walked
Her smile rivaled that of Aphrodite.
I could never stop myself from thinking of her,
And I never shall, for as long as I live.

But now, the Queen's army has called me up.
Now other men and I were sent over.
Into the trenches deep, of the vast land,
A beautiful land scarred by trenches and death.

When I peer over, the crater-ridden land,
I watched the distant town burning bright,
Brighter than Lucifer's Lake of Fire,
Screaming silently of Hades' cold grasp.

I watch our shells fly through the sky,
I listen as the Five-Nines go over.
I sit, pressing harder against my trench,
Thinking of my Aphrodite, far at home.

I think about her pearly white smile,
And her big, beautiful eyes, her blue eyes.
I would run for her, a hundred miles.
I'd fight for her, till I fall down and die.

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Copyright 2014 DeafSoldier
Published on Monday, February 24, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I suck at writing romance-style poems, so let me know how I did! Hahaha.
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  • A former member wrote: Well ..words coming from heart and written with emotions can never suck. They never do. I liked it, keep it up!

  • soul_versing On Tuesday, February 25, 2014, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    Wonderfully expressive tone of love. Honestly this made my heart melt, and it put a smile on my face. The ending was saddening and sexy at the same time, the things you would endure for her love... "Priceless" :) fantastic read of the day, thank you. Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Monday, February 24, 2014, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...this is good. the agony of a man & woman separated by war; we know it too well...

  • DarkDruidess On Monday, February 24, 2014, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    I find this heartbreakingly sad and longing...I hope that she understands your depth of love...it's amazing...

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