Comments by Patches

  • "haha. yea I was running through here the other night, away from some angry guards. the townsfolk were yelling something like "stop thief!". dunno what all that was about :P"
    Posted by Patches on "Morthal" by Malice In Wonderland
  • "There comes a point where you can take no more, and go no further. The limits of what could've been have been reached. The time for tears has long since passed. All the horizons become tainted with all you can never be. Such is my life, and that's just fine. I'll keep on going just out of spite :)"
    Posted by Patches on "ask the owl, he saw everything." by Malice In Wonderland
  • "Sort of like that "if it sounds too good to be true it probably is" mentality, which I've found works rather well around here in these parts. So many things this poem brings to mind. I could prob write all day about the complexities of relationships, acquaintances, and such. Maybe were all just puzzles, waiting for the right hand to complete it. Maybe nothing means anything at all. Anyways, my knee hurts. No more adventuring for me ;P"
    Posted by Patches on "Foxhole." by Malice In Wonderland
  • "I know this all too well. I have a friend who seemingly just wants to drink his life away, and hang around folks who'll take advantage of him, and I know he sneers upon my life, and how I've managed to turn things around for the better, but he'd never consider trying to be anything more than an old drunk, or find a job befitting his intellect. Kinda sad, but what can you do? Idk..."
    Posted by Patches on "'some men...just can't be reached....'" by Malice In Wonderland
  • "There were a couple type-o's here, but other than that, I loved how you wrote this piece. So macabre, and desolate. Only dead things linger in these shadowed corners of the heart.."
    Posted by Patches on "Matrimony in Death" by Malice In Wonderland
  • "damn Kya..I can't really imagine what it's like, but I can certainly empathize. things will work out, I'm sure :)"
    Posted by Patches on "dirt." by Malice In Wonderland
  • "if you rely on hopes and dreams to get by, I'm afraid you'll be disappointed. we set our expectations of others, and watch as they are crushed, one by one. i'm rather fond of spiders....;)"
    Posted by Patches on "....Take care." by Malice In Wonderland
  • "aw, I knew there was a tender spot in there you old softy, hehe. whomever this is for, they should take comfort in these words :)"
    Posted by Patches on "Tongue Tied" by Malice In Wonderland
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