Comments by Spiritus_Frumenti
- ""to whisper a word of goodbye /is not for me "...i really felt those words...your way of expressing is so tender, it feels comforting to read from you...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "see you" by maddin foxxxy
- "this poem invokes vivid images of childhood...once again, you are brilliant...and i agree with purr_verse regarding that verse..it's also my favorite...awesome...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Aid to the chilD" by maddin foxxxy
- ""Torn as it may seem The drapes are on
the floor the water's drowning whole
and floating by there are all the faces
I have worn" this stanza hit me deeply...for no matter what face you have on, in your poetry you will always be beautiful...-l-
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Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Dirty Looks & Adrenaline" by maddin foxxxy
- "so many sentiments you have shared here....very sweet and honest piece...and certainly the 'i hold the skies' stanza is brilliant...wonderful as always...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Entre Brazos" by maddin foxxxy
- "this is such a humble piece...but i have to say the last stanza was unneeded, with the 'fucked' word....this poem was perfect if you ended on 'today'...that word just has no place in such an honest and sweet poem...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Framed form Of you" by maddin foxxxy
- "i love this piece...especially the 4th and 5th stanza...i feel that way too, sometimes...it is difficult sometimes to feel happy when everybody is watching...then you feel insecure and bo back to solitude and the dark.... -l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Spies" by maddin foxxxy
