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Within Crimes of Time
By maddin foxxxy
The mind is broken in ..
thoughts disintegrating through the brain
And there it is recorded every single sin
Where does it all fall from….?
And When does it end
Everything again?
To live within our crimes
Crawling back through time
Between these cells
I imagine
This resembles hell ….
Hold on for too long
Watch a hand slip by ..
Freedom can close from inside ..
Woken up from noises
Voices I recognize..
Too blurry to take notice
Mixed up messages that confuse
And All this time unused …
Everything I thought I knew was wrong
Everything I’ve done I’ve had to pay along….
their mouth so full of scum
my eyes so far gone…..
screaming as they speak
Fighting to be strong ..
Now I know I’m human …
Now I know I’m weak ….
This time I’ll die alone …
( I don´t want to leave)
Think it is the things you own
And you are this alone …
(I cannot believe)..
To live within our crimes
We’ll always pay the time
We let slip by …
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Copyright 2005 maddin foxxxy
Published on Thursday, May 5, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Within Crimes of Time"
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A former member wrote:
its ok needs work though
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On Friday, November 18, 2005, diavolessa
(208)
wrote:
hell is inside...and yours in beatifully described.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
interesting piece.."Everything I thought I knew was wrong "..something about this verse impressed me..your words always so honest...-l-
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On Sunday, May 29, 2005, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
this prose is spoken with an even and fair tone.........telling and wicked in its existance......well done my friend................urban
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On Thursday, May 5, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Oh hell yeah! Other then the fact I agree with DarkDesires, this is just too awesome for words. Awesome job :)
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On Thursday, May 5, 2005, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
This is really good... I think the first two verses are my favorite... very passionate.
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