Comments by dwells
- "Think you might like "Sundays and Hayrides" that I posted a few days ago, from a memory when I was about your age, but without the darker ending, cheers A.
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Posted by dwells on "Like Clinging to Shale" by alesana
- "The empty house across the way with something buried underneath the rose bush. Sounds like a house of many memories, nicely done, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "And So I Live Again" by alesana
- "Guessing it's not going to happen then - lying beside you in life that is. Darkly grim and despondent and hope somebody gives you a new smile soon, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Lie You Here" by alesana
- "She sounds too good to be true. More holier than thou perhaps? The world will eventually break her. They say if you are 25 and not a liberal / save the world type - then you have no heart. They go on to say if you are 50 and still persist in your liberal views - then you have no brain. Hope this helps but I think she needs some character flaw we can all relate to, maybe? Thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Character Sketch" by alesana
- "DA said it best - this was great and strongly said, thanks A. You've come a long ways in the last few months."
Posted by dwells on "For What You Stand" by alesana
- "Don't tell me now that your incisors are starting to elongate (HA)! Can you still see yourself in the mirror? I get the same sensation whe I walk out of a bar on a bright day. Let me know when there's more to this - looks structurally fine to me, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Night Sensation" by alesana
- "Excellent job, a remorseful grave robber now a vampire for his troubles! This was several cuts way above average for this website (and others), thankyou for that."
Posted by dwells on "Grave Robber" by alesana
- "Great imagery. Wondering about green velvet water and then a tin foil bay shortly thereafter, perhaps a conflict here? Or maybe just me, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Campus on the Bay" by alesana
- "I used to know this feeling before the knees went. Sounds like a runner to me (never call them joggers). Thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Runner's High" by alesana
- "The "haves" and "have nots" - unless you are speaking metaphorically of a casual observer to your trials and tribulations? "
Posted by dwells on "Bay Window" by alesana
- "I look at death as the absence of life; without the personification. So not very poetically astute I'm afraid. Nevertheless, this piece seemed eerily written from a position of authority, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Like Sand through the Fingers of Death" by alesana
- "Like the imagery of "bones on fire and souls aflame" - must have been a bitch to live in Pompeii, hey?"
Posted by dwells on "Sunset Evergrey" by alesana
- "It's Greek to me! But, using my limited Spanish I can see that it is a lovely love poem: tears, desire, arms, increasing, always, precious sweet love (last line?). May be more Italian / Brazilian than Latin?? Welcome."
Posted by dwells on "Amo Te" by alesana
