Amor Immortalis

By alesana

 Soft skin, swirled fingertips
Reaching out, seeing love
A silent teardrop falls
As fingers brush against the ice
Ice - not sweet adoration
One hand on either side
The warmth of veins to melt this wall
Patience, faith, purity
If it takes a thousand years -
This wall will disappear.

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Copyright 2011 Meg Owens
Published on Friday, August 19, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Saturday, August 20, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Mmmmmm... Nice! Hello there and welcome to DarkPoetry... I see i'm a lil late due to the amount of posts' but it's nice to see you comfy.... Scholar

  • alesana On Saturday, August 20, 2011, alesana (41)By person wrote:

    oh I've only been on a couple days but I love to write what I call "scribbles" which are a bit like poems but not quite there

  • Devilish On Saturday, August 20, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    They are there... And this poet here below me is dwells. one of the best. you should indulge in his work he could help mentor you. I was lucky enough to have one his name is GrandaddyBonegrinder, Also the best... So to say the least your in good hands.... Scholar

  • dwells On Saturday, August 20, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Making me melt, thanks.

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