Comments by Liz
- "It doesn't mean you have to write 11 lines. Just less than 12. Ten lines, or eight, or six, would have also qualified."
Posted by Liz on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "it was LESS THAN 12. not LESS THAN OR EQUAL TO. there is a subtle mathematical difference involving this not qualifying"
Posted by Liz on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "nice structure. lots going on without wasted words, the repetition is a nice pattern. love how it ends"
Posted by Liz on "Creeping" by veingo
- ""the person behind the/ person behind the counter" I love the stream of conciousness style that makes your carefully chosen words seem a rant. Were you aware that there is a exclamation point sketched in the shading of your poem?"
Posted by Liz on "beat" by Jonas
- "I'm really sorry, but I can't read the font that small. Do I really have to copy and paste and resize all your work, to read it? It's a bit dangerous, to presume your work is worth all that time on my part."
Posted by Liz on "ohgod" by doll on the rag
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