Comments by Musik2MyEyes
- "Your posts are having this built in entertainment factor for me. First I read them and enjoy what I "see". Then I get that little Author's note punchline that serves the same purpose as the prize in Cracker Jacks. There is always something new...unlike those times I would get the Parade of Plastic Pachyderms. I like the surprises from your posts better ;)"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Painting a picture with words." by Dreamzz
- "............................................................................You......are hilarious. I love this. -shakes head snickering-"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "WHERE IS EVERYONE?!" by Dreamzz
- "You know...there's a real cost savings to be had if you have a doc in your dreams helping you out. And honestly...I think he is best qualified to know you very well. This was another interesting post from you. And I have begun to enjoy your Author's notes almost as much as the piece itself. -giggles-"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Why did I?" by Dreamzz
- "Such passion!!!!!!!!! (LOVE the Author's note LOL) Talk about diving head first...I don't think you looked or even care if there is any water down there. Crazy damn emotions...the desire to be happy overrides any sensibility and good judgment. But oh WHAT A WILD RIDE IT WILL BE! I liked this piece."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "How can it be?" by Dreamzz
- "Damn the tears are flowing hard today. This was a tribute to more than one girl. I am nearly lost for words...which NEVER happens. But I am numb from this piece stunning me. It shows me as you well pointed out...we have the ability to recognize pain and as nothing more than being another soul on this planet, we should attempt to help if there is any way possible. If not directly, then by reaching out and directing others who can. As sorry as I am for the loss of a life...I am sorry for the burden of guilt you are carrying. I hope you ask for help in learning how to deal with that. Because believe me, there are experts on guilt, and you are not the first to need a hand. I'm so glad you were able to post this. Your strength is letting it out. I admire you so much."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "School" by Dreamzz
- "Nicely done. I have some favorite lines: "Last thoughts like melting ice" ... "Last taste is like your skin" ... "And all of this feels like the past"."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Last was like" by Dreamzz
- "Dreamzz!! You make me smile! Look at you rising to a challenge! I am truly flattered and blushing. And the fact "artist" is in the title makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. You know what I'm going to do??? -fav- ... =)"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "A life of an artist" by Dreamzz
- "When I started reading this I thought it would make a good song. A few minor adjustments and it could be =) "
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Rules of love" by Dreamzz
- "Good visuals throughout this one. There were some conflicts but I related them to the fact this was a dream effect. Life is but a dream............or a nightmare."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Life is but a Dream" by Dreamzz
- "The yo-yo effect of a bad relationship. Why is it they can wipe away their dirty deeds just by making your heart swell...and they very well know and use that technique...over and over. I like the ending...you left it a little open ended for the reader...my version is she used the knife on him when he pulled his normal bullshit lines. That's just me being evil...because I know the sad ending would be her not being able to take it any more and use it on herself in an attempt to hurt him. Unfortunately that end never works...the asshole didn't have real feelings to begin with so how would your loss hurt him? Wow, just shows what a good piece this was...look at me rant! LOL (btw...you need to fix 8th line up from the bottom...I think you meant "around" not "are")"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "And..." by Dreamzz
- "Haha. Millions of women have been through these feelings. Not necessarily with a death involved...not of a person any way. But you can bet when a relationship dies where the guy was thought to be being used by some bitch...there is someone who has been waiting in the wings...and when he gets dumped she is over there singing a happy little song in her head..."Yay he's finally free! Maybe now I can show him real love." Good little piece there...made me smile with that perfect last line."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "She's Dead" by Dreamzz
- "No roller coaster ride here...it shot straight down at lightning speed. Lots of impact. Well chosen lines. A good read."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Insanity" by Dreamzz
- "Guess we can't depend there will ever be someone to save us. Honestly, when it comes right down to it...we only have ourselves. I thought this was a good piece...makes one think."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Why can't you help?" by Dreamzz
- "This was a good piece...a little cryptic. Not as strong as some of your other work...like you were struggling with it. Maybe that was the point. Times of confusion do not come out with precise thoughts. I love the contrast in the title and the piece itself. Who knew the end of the rainbow was such a dark place?"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Somewhere over the rainbow" by Dreamzz
- "Perfect. Really. What is seen is not always what is there. And I think people hide things not to be deceitful but to protect others from a reality they may not be able to understand. Or maybe just so you don't have to explain yourself to everyone all the time. It's a courtesy of sorts. Good piece once again. You have become a fav of mine...everything you write strikes a chord in me...we must share a favorite song."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Fake." by Dreamzz
- "Again you write something so profound in a simplistic form. This will invariably speak to each reader in a different manner...which is also what makes it so good. The last verse hit me hardest. People come and go in our lives...and their impact ranges. From fading friendships or casual acquaintances to losing those we love to death. Even the ones that die have different levels of impact. You said a mouthful with only a small bite of words. "
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Life is not Love" by Dreamzz
- "I know I read this before and I must have gotten distracted before I commented...because I certainly would have commented due to the fact I love this piece. This one screams to me just like I scream towards the ceiling at night. IF ONLY THERE WAS A WAY TO GO BACK! So many lives could be changed for the better. By tweaking just one instance in time. That's all it would take. If only life would allow us this ONE chance and you had to make the perfect choice. I know I would do it. Thank you so much for writing this. I think you have inspired a new piece from me."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Time unwined" by Dreamzz
- "Ohhh I like this very much. There is heat but a little playfulness too. Nice mixture. You used obscenity appropriately...a dabble here and there to make the point. This is well written. Kudos!"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Love" by Dreamzz
- "Good creepy write...starts off mellow and gets gorier as it progresses. I notice all the victims are women as if the writer is imagining herself as each victim and then writes about it. Can you imagine yourself as me? I would like you to try ;)"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Death stories..." by Dreamzz
- "If love could just be expressed without words...maybe it would be easier to recover from. I like this one Dreamzz."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Lies." by Dreamzz
- "For some reason you are making me giggle...when I don't want to. Why does love always have to be something "cold" with you? first a bag of ice and now snow? I'm getting all cold sitting here reading these! LOL Stop that!
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Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Love I Think..." by Dreamzz
- "Going through the life cycle...it eventually comes full circle doesn't it? If you live long enough you become almost childlike and dependent again. Sad really. Good subject matter."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Getting Gone" by Dreamzz
- "You voice what so many struggle with...it would be nice to "know" there is something that bears believing...people want proof if they are truly to believe and give all their convictions...but the question remains "Who are we to demand proof when supposedly it is all around us?" Is it there? Are we just not seeing it? Your writing raised a lot of questions and I am still pondering...I don't usually comment on this subject, but I liked the way you wrote this...so absolutely certain of your stand (I do not believe), right up until the last verse..."Maybe I believe....""
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Maybe I do believe" by Dreamzz
