Life is not Love

By Dreamzz

Losing
It
For
Everyone

 

Inner
Sanity

 

Never
Overlook
Things


Losing
Others
Varies
Every time
 


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Copyright 2010 Dreamzz
Published on Friday, March 19, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, April 4, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (193)By person wrote:

    Again you write something so profound in a simplistic form. This will invariably speak to each reader in a different manner...which is also what makes it so good. The last verse hit me hardest. People come and go in our lives...and their impact ranges. From fading friendships or casual acquaintances to losing those we love to death. Even the ones that die have different levels of impact. You said a mouthful with only a small bite of words.

  • A former member wrote: great write, i really liked the pare where you say "Losing it for everyone". it shows that you are trying but not succeding

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