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Last was like
By Dreamzz
My blood drips like tears.
My heart feels like lead.
Yours
eyes are glazed like glass.
Mouth open like a cave.
My knife
is logged inside my neck like it'll make the pain fade away.
My
last breath are like the wind.
Last thoughts like melting ice.
Last sights are like a misty night.
Last taste is like your skin.
Last words sound like goodbye.
Last kiss feels like the last.
And all of this feels like the past.
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Copyright 2010
Published on Sunday, March 28, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, April 4, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(193)
wrote:
Nicely done. I have some favorite lines: "Last thoughts like melting ice" ... "Last taste is like your skin" ... "And all of this feels like the past".
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On Sunday, March 28, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Very nice, the last moments of life... great visuals... the last 7 lines were perfect... thanks
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