Last was like

By Dreamzz

 My blood drips like tears.
My heart feels like lead.
Yours eyes are glazed like glass.
Mouth open like a cave.
My knife is logged inside my neck like it'll make the pain fade away.
My last breath are like the wind.
Last thoughts like melting ice.
Last sights are like a misty night.
Last taste is like your skin.
Last words sound like goodbye.
Last kiss feels like the last.
And all of this feels like the past.

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Copyright 2010
Published on Sunday, March 28, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, April 4, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192)By person wrote:

    Nicely done. I have some favorite lines: "Last thoughts like melting ice" ... "Last taste is like your skin" ... "And all of this feels like the past".

  • Malcholm Dark On Sunday, March 28, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    Very nice, the last moments of life... great visuals... the last 7 lines were perfect... thanks

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