Painting a picture with words.

By Dreamzz

The river is shaped in the shape of an S.
Long and stretched out as if its been stressed
the rocks in the stream make the water move in the shape of a frown the water in front stuck from going around.
Lilies float down the winding path left behind by me hoping to make someone smile and laugh.
Trees shade the area block out the sun.
Brown little chipmunks dancing in them so fun.
The sun is just setting the sky is bright orange,blue,pink,purple,and even slightly grey.
The sight makes me go "Wow..." what else can I say.
The water is making a sound like rain on a tin rooftop.
And the animals dancing making the sound of the babies first steps.
The sun shining out like a spotlight.
Lighting up natures canvas.
The trees like spring flowers turning to leaves and every memory like fall golden.
White cotton cloud, blue satin skys, and the days they just keep on rollen.
And as the sky goes dark the sky comes to life with stars giving their applause
for the crickets that play, the dogs that bay, and the tenor of the frogs.
The water slows down the rocks now making the frown seem some what like a smile.
The animals asleep new ones awake and everything placed like tile.
And as i finish my last brush stroke of the night I sign my name at the bottom.
Making the picture for all to see.
Now pick up your paintbrush and follow me.

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Copyright 2010 Dreamzz
Published on Monday, April 5, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Hope you enjoy I hope to make this elemental maybe? Oh well Now i have to pee is all I'm saying...
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  • Musik2MyEyes On Monday, April 5, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192)By person wrote:

    Your posts are having this built in entertainment factor for me. First I read them and enjoy what I "see". Then I get that little Author's note punchline that serves the same purpose as the prize in Cracker Jacks. There is always something new...unlike those times I would get the Parade of Plastic Pachyderms. I like the surprises from your posts better ;)

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