Comments by Mars
- "Well, I'm here for one. I can help you with words? *hugs* and sometimes being 'out of line' is what saves people. I've been there. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Words Fail Me" by SilentStalker
- "You are beginning to be another of my favorite poets. Your choice in words, your style and slight pauses build the tension and beautiful release of your poems. Don't stop. You are great. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Tea Leaves" by Blood Saga
- "There was heartbreak and disappointment, but would you have it any other way if it was without him? "
Posted by Mars on "The man I knew" by Lylani
- "I haven't seen you post in a while babe. This is great, maybe its not fear but its insecurity and low self-esteem. You are worth it honey and I'm not just saying that. You're an amazing guy. She just didn't see it. -mars "
Posted by Mars on "Scared of Everything" by Phoenix
- "I..Have a mere memory of reading this before. Maybe its deja vu (I'm not accusing of plagarism) just remember something...the first few lines took me back to a poem I wrote once.. reminded me to finish others... and I like the style, the way you used the spaced periods..gave it a slow feeling..like the calm ocean. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Mermaid" by Blood Saga
- "As I read, my nose filled with the smell of paint. Not only because the acrylics are all over my room, but because this had a sort of abstract painting in mind. I loved the traintrack, arms outstretched picture. I've never done that, I wish I could. Anyways, I heart this in my head because I can't heart it on my profile. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "with black on gray" by Six-Out
- "I found my own interpretation of this poem building as I read. I like it a lot. Brings backthe past ;) -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Finding the light" by Gaz
- "I like this, it was somewhat like a preach, and the perfect rhythmn nailed it. I enjoy your works. -mars"
Posted by Mars on "Rebellious Sinner #1" by climaks
- "this has to be one of the most depressing and beautiful poes i've read in my entire life. She hasn't died. not yet. you shouldn't dare to wish death on your Star. "
Posted by Mars on "Stardeath" by Echoes of Orpheus
- ":) I like this, maybe trying should happen both ways. You give some and you take some love, maybe then you'll be ready to fully love. "
Posted by Mars on "to love, [i try]" by sanglante
- "It was touchy. I never knew how it felt like this, but I just found out. I hope you're all better now. "
Posted by Mars on "To dad." by D3ADT0WN
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