Comments by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "Yes this is quite the mouth-candy. It's very fluid. " We sit like strangers, my toungue and my mind." - that line is amazing. We wander this earth, and those who wish to seek the answers wish for too much... I think..."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Shadowed by Words" by RubyXero
- "Ive always wondered, what contains the universe...how can it be finite? Our logic simply cannot account for the universe. We cannot even grasp the concept of infinity/eternity ( our minds are conditioned to only understand a beginning and an end) This was a wonderful proof. :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "A Stance on the Infinity of the Universe" by Lawless Fighter
- "Apples, reminds me of sin ( thanks to genesis connotation, then again apple was never mentioned...anyway!) "the cats are fighting I wouldn't seperate them"- this is a crucial line to the poem, i love it.
There are a few typos, but overall I love the title, the body and the ending. Lovely :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "apples and smiles" by Pureheartless
- "Clever. Random Bullshit Generator. I can relate to the feeling... of smelling winter, and frost. ( I don't ice skate but I ski :) )You feel apart from others, but closer to nature and your own senses. Anyway this was beautifully written, it endulges the senses. "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Thin ice" by palenoble
- "This was written in such smooth and charming meter. The imagery was fantastic. Narratives with dialogue are my favorite, and this was such a wonderful read. I got so much out of this. Things start with passion, then turn to commercial sellouts. " to blemish words with bindings." - connotations bastardize language. "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The Circus [Second Act - Culminant Du Vert]" by Fantecstasy
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