Comments by Kaleidoscope_Heart

"I come and go on DP in phases. Whenever i do, I always read your work. You are AMAZING. Your talent is inspiring. And this poem itself... all I can say is I feel and see and understand...and yet I still wonder... like with everything you write. All I have to say is.... if you magically posted again, I would be thrilled. ;)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "the rain is thinking of you today." by Lynaes

"This was so beautiful. It was soft, and lulling. The long lines followed by short lines gaves that quality to it. This is a peice that connects deeply, to arouse a memory, melting the heart of the reader. It's comforting, and at the same time...saddening. Hmm. Whatever the present situation, it is always lovely to know that the memories will always be preserved and untainted. :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "fractured fairy tale" by Crush Room

"And I just realized the title; is it meant to justify the brutal sex? ;)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Angels Don't Live In This City" by PaYaSiN

"I loved this. My feelings are torn; I can't decide if I am disturbed or allured (but of course ironically being disturbed is caused by being allured in most cases but anyway...lol). This is very, animalistic in that the hunger is so primal. It's irrational because there is a sense of carelessness but rational because towards the end you put a reason behind your desire. The imagery is extremely vivid. And I see you've used your usual tunnel style that slams into an ending. Very addicting indeed. Passionate, aggresive, and uncompromising :) "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Angels Don't Live In This City" by PaYaSiN

"This is an unusual style, but in a good way. That's interesting, because usually comparing a love to a rose is cliche but here it is not. The last two lines are lovely and very relatable, which contrast to the complex lines before them. The last line especially was great; it reflects how language will fail us everytime when w wish to convey our thoughts and feelings (especialy in english!) But ironically, we still try everytime :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The Flower of Beyond" by palenoble

"You never dissapoint. I love the brutality in entwining raw sex with a mocking reference to religion. There is nothing self conscious about this; which makes it so honest and real. The flow and internal rhyme tunnel nicely into the final word; which is ironic: "Preach." Heh. This put a good smirk on my face."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Ice Cream From the Poor" by PaYaSiN

"Aww. I've always been very drawn to aggresive art and you create it beautifully :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Flirting With Disaster" by PaYaSiN

"I love how you never hold back; it's like a hurricane of rage (mixed with something else) and images. You structured this in a way that the sentences cascade into eachother, which works interestingly with the abrupt slapintheface ending. Powerful :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Flirting With Disaster" by PaYaSiN

"Hmm.. very profound and wise. I like the sort of parable-like tone to the rhythmn...it makes it feel like a tale you would tell children (but in a good way)."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "True Warriors" by Mithiras

"AND, the language you use sucks the reader right in. I felt like the images were dancing in front of me. Indeed a woman to die for ;)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

"I think I am going crazy cause I could have sworn I posted a comment. Anyway, abolutely intoxicating and seductive."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero

""the sun drowns the masses with the bustle of their mundane lives their very own productivity their very own personal death"- You're always able to say so much in such sweet, concise stanzas. :) Lovely my friend. Reminds me of when people walk about with big dumb psuedo smiles and I wanna scream "WTF IS YOUR PROBLEM" lol "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "holding on to night" by Taunting The Reaper

"Your poems always make me feel...tension. I feel like I forget to breath. All in a good way though. Morbid imagry, vivid and profound. And your style is almost...cascading in rhythmn. Kinda like...idk how to describe it..."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The Death of Marilyn Monfuckingroe" by PaYaSiN

"This was a kick in the teeth..but in a most delightful way. "And molest myself til I wake up smiling" - very amusing, and served its point. The first two lines really sucked me in, the rest was brilliantly brutal. You know as a child, I always hated the way religion used to make me feel bad..especially during masturbation, it was quite a mood killer. ANYWAYS, awesome shit."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Sikhism, But Not Really" by PaYaSiN

"My head is spinning, the last stanza knocked the wind out of me. This is so brilliant..."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Metaphors Spin Easily (from the mouths of Dark Poets)" by lordshadow

"God damn that made me shiver ;) Wonderfully sadistic my friend "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Rein of Terror... Pt. 2 ( WARNING: ADULT CONTENT)" by RubyXero

"Wow...amazing. It's sad knowing that life eventually yeilds death, just like the seasons. This came together beautifully"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "feeding the earth" by Taunting The Reaper

"This reminds me of the book Crank. Sex depends on a hit, and a hit depends on sex. Lovely write as always "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "stiletto street sex" by Taunting The Reaper

"Lovely like venom. We are all parasitic in our own way. But yes, knowledge of defeat is more brutal than the defeat itself. So is ignorance bliss?"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Only Ash Remains" by GraveFlower

"Ah, I know this feeling... Photos seem eternal, but things always change. Funny how a moment can be artificially eternalized, and yet the emotions are impossible to preserve in such a way...."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "coffee stained photographs" by Taunting The Reaper

"We don't have free will. If you define it as "a choice not having been caused, or predetermined." We are products of our enviornment, combined with the energies of the universe. Neuroscience actually has yeilded evidence to support that we don't have free will. ( News york times articles ) Anyways this was a great write. Egocentric as we all are, isn't it a bitch to aquire such knowledge?"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Fate is Fickle but Free Will is a Bitch" by TheUltimateOutlaw

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