The Death of Marilyn Monfuckingroe
By PaYaSiN
Those beautiful, bright, blue eyes;
If looks could kill, I'd be a dead mother fucker.
Your smile brings me down,
That innocent lie, your mask, your front
Feels this heart with hatred and rage.
I love that, which I hate,
Homicidal thoughts linger; how do I kill you without a trace?
Once I have you captive,
I'm forced to think
Quick and painless, or slow and drown out?
My demented mind chooses torture no doubt.
So let's get this show over with,
Little Miss Blonde Hair, and Blue Eyes,
Gasoline on that hair,
You hate to scream, but that sound excites me.
Slit your throat, watch you gasp for air
Who would've thought I'd be turned on by your despair?
I'll slit your wrists,
Unhealable gashes on your face
Most think a smart guy like me,
Would never be a suspect in this case.
Let's laugh and smirk,
No one knows it was me
Who walked away as your body burned.
Comments on "The Death of Marilyn Monfuckingroe"
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A former member wrote:
It is very violent and it gave me chills. The good kind of chills.
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On Saturday, August 9, 2008, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
Your poems always make me feel...tension. I feel like I forget to breath. All in a good way though. Morbid imagry, vivid and profound. And your style is almost...cascading in rhythmn. Kinda like...idk how to describe it...
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On Sunday, August 10, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
I love comments like that. It really inspires me to write more things so people can enjoy it. Also my new work I try write more lyrically, so that could be the "rhythm." ;]
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A former member wrote:
Well now we know...also, very creative torture techniques.
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On Saturday, June 21, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
lol..... Well when you're fucked up in the head these ideas come quite easily. ;]
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On Saturday, June 21, 2008, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
lol. Why?
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On Saturday, June 21, 2008, PaYaSiN
(49) wrote:
why what? lol. your short response has confused me. xD