Comments by verablue
- "i agree with magic hatter...haunting, but the kind that keeps you coming back for more because you cant forget. so many intense descriptions..."your joyride spine", "sketched bloodline", "topographic sanity"...fantastic."
Posted by verablue on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah
- "2:14pm...7 and a half hours of sleep and i'm still speachless. no ones written me a poem since i was 15. "pumping poetry
through circuit board veins" i love it!"
Posted by verablue on "verablue" by carlosjackal
- "also, why the hell were you not on my favorites list?? you should have been on there long ago! my apologies."
Posted by verablue on "verablue" by carlosjackal
- "fucking awesome you are!!! i'm a tad bit speachless (but its also 5:42am and i haven't slept yet). i'll be back to read it a few more times in the morning :)"
Posted by verablue on "verablue" by carlosjackal
- "its not really meant to fit together....its just discarded fragments of peices i cant seem to finish. perhaps someday parts of it will move on to bigger and better things...but i doubt it."
Posted by verablue on "de//fragment this mess" by verablue
- "i'm very much enjoying this "she spoke..." series of yours...they just get better every time. "and she was screaming mementos.
like stolen words and vodka. turning the shades of grey" this whole stanza was just incredible!"
Posted by verablue on "she spoke emerald" by Six-Out
- "oooh....new talent! please do stay. this is such a fantasic entrance. "He just watched, that far seeing boy,
As I stand below blue emptiness" beautiful!"
Posted by verablue on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "i'm surprised no one has commented yet. "Strewn about a canvas of
Sediment", "Fallen limbs, and plastic
Bumpers"....you have quite an original voice. i will have to read more of your work."
Posted by verablue on "The Times Nefarious" by Sepulcrawl
- "jared's writing is indeed an inspiration. he was a poet before he was a musician. he's also since become a good friend."
Posted by verablue on "terminal blue" by verablue
- "no criticism needed, because it is 'good'. infact, i would go beyond 'good' and tell you that its absolutely beautiful. "I re-collect the worlds you whispered" you always amaze me."
Posted by verablue on "abuelo [tatuajes y memorias]" by Six-Out
- "this poem is my last few months in a nut shell. beautifully written, and a very honest write."
Posted by verablue on "And Still" by call to arms
- ""I try
to make the words
flow down the page,
cascading like a
waterfall" lovely."
Posted by verablue on "I Try." by lstdarkness
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