Un Embrasser Au Cemetary, Ma Petite étoile
By Bella Butchery
Café du monde….eating and sipping coffee….
New Orleans is the strangest dream
Victorian crimson with a dash of tourism
“you look lost, what are you doing here?”
To my surprise a young, French accented woman, wearing prada
persuaded my attention from this write
[Her life was tattooed on her arms with stunning detail]
I told her I was here to save the world
With the art of fallen angles. spoken in
A language that melts prejudice
And replaces with romanticism
Chat chat chat chat
She took me by the arm up Rue Royal
And said meet me at Le Richelieu
*10:30 sharp*
French vision
Dark eyes, dark hair
And a stare that could
Have been the end of the world
{ma petite étoile}
Sprinkle twilight a sugar coated sour
City with a twenty-four hour bass line
A pulse to no match I have ever known
White dress/black polka dots/matching bandana
*black stilettos*
[I could die right now]
“I will show you true new New Orleans beauty”
Coffee in hand but not for her
Burbon street skin selling
Big daddies topless and bottomless
Her roommate, nude with dollars between mannequin fingers
[hand grenade supernova]
“ceci est le garçon blond que vous avez parlé de?”
She rushed up and gave me a big kiss on the cheek
[her septum ring graced my face for a moment]
[a broken ballerina]
"You two look like something a rockabilly Dhalli would paint"
*portrait lovers*
{au revoir les enfants de la nuit!}
Up Rue St.Luis we ran until graveyard no.1
Planted the landscape / trapped my heart
And snagged her dress on the fence
[a ripped collage]
She pulled a bottle and recited Lovecraft
In French while Tom Waits set the scene
[lyrical pianist]
She picked up the glass polish and poise
She gave me an absinth kiss
Soaked lips intoxicating in their own respect...
We talked forever on how to change the world and
The due process for art exchange
Saving souls and toppling governments….
[I was wrapped into every word]
Next to a shallow grave we danced
And kissed some more
[Nicholas Bouidouin de Laffiete if I can recall correctly]
Ballroom voodoo lovers….
The soft horns seemed to fallow us
As theme music for a grand escape
To her cheap studio on Rue St. Peters
Shed my clothes like giving me new life.
“you look like a modern statue of David,
The way men should look, and your eyes
Can pierce my heart quicker then any
Knife wound could muster”
[making love to a Sigur Ros soundtrack]
The smell of sheets and petals
To a subtle beat
And our romanticism
Jazzed a blaze of heat
But time dropped like a suicide
And she has to work,
And I will have to take a plane.
Walking out of the apartment
She danced to the curb and clocked in
And I wanted to take her with me
[exposed her whole heart in one night, minus one tiny detail]
{mon David, vous êtes mon premier amour, vous êtes mon dernier amour,
je ne vous verrai jamais encore…… vous remercier mon petit nuage}
[she stole my words and put it in her purse]
You wrote this for me
And I will never doubt love again
She made me want to die
{ma petite étoile}
Comments on "Un Embrasser Au Cemetary, Ma Petite étoile"
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A former member wrote:
Like an orchestration of all things conjurable. I am amazed at this. Love finding treasures :)
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On Sunday, July 22, 2007, Revisable Retina
(81) wrote:
This is my first time reading this.. I don't know what to say. *heart yearns, smile fades* Very beautiful Cloud. A New Orleans romance must have made you feel euphoria.
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On Saturday, July 21, 2007, snow
(14) wrote:
great work. now i know why i learned french ill est tres magnifique (my spelling sux though)
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On Tuesday, July 10, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
i'm undecided on this....
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On Monday, May 14, 2007, Eric
(77) wrote:
Wow.. very unique.. Love this!!
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On Saturday, April 21, 2007, Hurtmeplease
(6) wrote:
I really enjoyed this piece of work, very unique and refreshing. I just need to find some to translate the french, I'm dying to know what it says, lol!
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On Monday, March 19, 2007, Carmina Gitana
(149) wrote:
Mmm :) For some reason, Billie Holiday played in the back of my head as I read this. Dirty-decadent in the best way possible. Delicious.
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
good :) she is definatly an inspiration to me and was listening to her all the while there!
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, openureyes
(55) wrote:
Im glad I came across this. You bring to life pieces of my fantasies.Like a dream I dont want to wake up from...... "your eyes pierce my heart quicker than any Knife wound can muster" my favorite line...beautiful, passionate, enticing:)
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
a vivid trip ......encapsulating a true and fast experience......so very well written so very well felt.........urban
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On Saturday, March 3, 2007, verablue
(106) wrote:
how the hell did i miss this one??? holy hell....i didn't want it to end...i cant even pick a line to quote, there are too many. this.is.perfection.
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A former member wrote:
to say this is amazing is an understatement at best.You have captured a living entity on paper.I didn't read the words, I fell in love with them.
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A former member wrote:
There's something to be wholehearted stated about a tale that echoes throughout a listening mind like this, it recalling events that are vicariously stated and that fit into the hippocket as well.
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A former member wrote:
I've adored and stood on rooftops, catching the buzz of glances and they glaze the landscape of mind. And you remind me.
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On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, prettydisgrace
(93) wrote:
beautiful story,emotional...thank you for sharing
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, Tonights Decision
(132) wrote:
deadly...pure deadly poetry under a dusky french moon. perfect mind trip.
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On Thursday, February 22, 2007, GraveFlower
(240) wrote:
je'taime, simply beautiful, it was like a lulluby, i found myself swaying, getting lost in the words, and then, it ended, such a shame, yet so beautiful, you are truely amazing ~*dani*~
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On Thursday, February 22, 2007, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
dusky and smooth with such luscious imagery and feel, outstanding mindscapes and shivers created by this
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On Thursday, February 22, 2007, lstdarkness
(26) wrote:
Amazing. Simply fantastic. Imagery, use of french, what else is there to say? *speechles*
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
The images were lovely and I never wanted them to end, you are unique ~Mirrored Nymph
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
You are a genius this was magical.. Incredible, I can still taste it on my tongue as I sit back for a moment and try to breath admist the smoke that seems to cloud around me right now.. Beautiful.. Heartbreaking
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A former member wrote:
Enchanting, great read. lOVE THE Imagery, felt like I was present.
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A former member wrote:
"Chat chat chat chat" Love the Poe-like tintinnabulation! The beat, the rhythm. The mascara, mannequin & masquerade colours. Dripping black: "City with a twenty-four hour bass line." Wish I said that. This is a supernova, w/ a Lovecraftian Z. Brite...
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
"And our romanticism/Jazzed a blaze of heat"...the detail and story was magnificent, such a great, original take on boy-meets-girl..Write on Brotha Shoot Me!!
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A former member wrote:
:)
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
i think ill take that as a compliment :)
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, nell
(270) wrote:
you sir, cast a spell in this piece, it left me feeling kind of dreamy, good write=)
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
ahhh..tied together perfectly with a big red killer bow...son beau..son beau!
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
This was an amazing read, ride...not sure which one best describes it.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, DarkPoet
(229) wrote:
Incredible! What a shot of imagination and creativity, I love it.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was gorgeous..im such a sucker for a man who can speak french but even without it this was like a picture show..mind candy and i savored every lick, great write ~kristy
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
a beautiful blend of language.......i love the poetic play-by-play ...very passionate
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
Exquisite.. you used the french language so fluently.. "good bye, children of the night".. this is wonderful.. one of your most vivd piece of art yet..
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
"Ballroom voodoo lovers." Ah, your beautiful words are delicious. As always. This makes me want to take a trip to Paris before setting up home in Spain. :)
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
ill bring the pina collatas kiddo ;)
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
:D
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A former member wrote:
First of all, this was so fucking beautiful. There isn't a word great enough to describe my love for this piece. What an amazing write. If I could kiss you I would!